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5/12/2014 c1 18lightmylumiere
First off, I like your story! One thing I noticed is at the very beginning you called Zaneeta "the mayor's wife" but that's all. Thank you for reading my story and let me know what you think of the rest of it. I look forward to reading more of this one.
2/22/2014 c1 manuelmusical14
I can easily picture the two in a scene like this. Tommy does not seem that bad of a person
3/26/2011 c1 94xCaligula
I liked it a lot, but it could either have more description and be longer, or take out some description to make it a shorter vignette. Also, keep in mind this is 1912 when typing the dialogue; some seemed a little modern. Otherwise, I think it was great!

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