for Diego's Rose1/1/2013 c2 Alanna
Worst story ever
Worst story ever
4/26/2011 c2 
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wouldn't they give birth to litters? or at least 2 cubs? and I agree with 0clairebear0
9x XRoweenaJAugustineX xwouldn't they give birth to litters? or at least 2 cubs? and I agree with 0clairebear0
3/9/2011 c2 Madame Walnut
It would be easier on the eyes if you separated the speech out with lines. the 'A few months later' part is pretty lazy. It has the potential to be quite an interesting story but it (and also the female character) need a little more development.
It would be easier on the eyes if you separated the speech out with lines. the 'A few months later' part is pretty lazy. It has the potential to be quite an interesting story but it (and also the female character) need a little more development.