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8/2/2012 c1 2themagentacolor
Haha. Sherlock:) And I feel bad for Celia D: Hope ya update soon:D
1/31/2012 c1 4QueenSword
Love it so far! I really hope you'll continue :)
1/15/2012 c1 7kie1993
love please update
3/7/2011 c1 11BeastlessBelle
The plot is brilliant, if not a bit overdone, but you can't argue with a new flair on an old concept. That being said I feel like the characters are a bit OOC. Moriarty was fine in chapter two up until about the very last bit. The thing to remember with writing is that you don't want to get a case of the Cause-we-cans. Just because you can write something into a story, doesn't necessarily mean you should. While its entirely your story and you can do what you want with it, eventually stories get a life of their own and to throw something in because you can might actually damage it more than it helps.

That's really more helpful advice than a critique, but its still something to keep in mind.

Mostly just reign in the characters a bit more. You have the potential of making a great story. Don't give up.

~Gwen

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