for Every Teen's Worst Nightmare3/10/2011 c2 
14Toxic-Hibari
Hahahahaha, Keigo is an idiot!
Good points: Like normal, good spelling, grammar and punctuation, I like how you made Uryu manipulated his fathe into agreeing with him. I wonder what Isshin will do if the 'pregnancy lecture' is taken away from him... Hmmm...
Bad points: you wer spelling 'Uryu' or 'Uryuu' wrong, always spelling it like 'Uyruu'.
Apart from that you did a great job XDD
14Toxic-HibariHahahahaha, Keigo is an idiot!
Good points: Like normal, good spelling, grammar and punctuation, I like how you made Uryu manipulated his fathe into agreeing with him. I wonder what Isshin will do if the 'pregnancy lecture' is taken away from him... Hmmm...
Bad points: you wer spelling 'Uryu' or 'Uryuu' wrong, always spelling it like 'Uyruu'.
Apart from that you did a great job XDD
3/9/2011 c2 45ShadowSword524
Haha! So funny, please tell me ichigo and rukia are gonna have a funny scene where they try to fight hollows and take care of the baby at the same time.
45ShadowSword524Haha! So funny, please tell me ichigo and rukia are gonna have a funny scene where they try to fight hollows and take care of the baby at the same time.
3/9/2011 c2 8Assault Godzilla
~And the sun will set for you
The sun will set for you
And the shadow of the day
Will embrace the world in grey
And the sun will set for you~
-lyrics from Linkin Park's "Shadow of the Day"
Ah, another chapter already? Yay! ^_^ Wait, I don't know how to react... yet.
Well, it seems the project is gonna be... a lot of "fun" for some "couples." Yeah, thank God I didn't go through that whatsoever. I do pity those around the country that have to, though. Being zombified from such a task would mean more than brain damage. Speaking of which, dropping a baby on its head is no laughing matter, regardless of the circumstances. I have a younger sister with autism, and my parents and I have learned to deal with it for years. I'll admit, at times, it makes me wanna wish to be an only child, or that i have left home to live alone sooner, but I gave me an experience and perspective of how someone copes with these conditions. By all means, if a baby doll made by a former Soul Reaper to be target practice, make sure the dude gets the message. And the psycho dad that thinks it's all fun in games until an Energy arrow isn't the only thing that gets shot up his a-. "This just keeps getting better." Yes, yes it does. -_-" You think Ichigo will see his mom in the Soul Society in the future? I actually hope so.
"The apple doesn't fall far from the tree." Is a quote like that gonna be part of an upcoming chapter soon?
This week's manga chapter has Orihime being brave. And somehow losing her mind. What happens next may not be pretty. At least the Fullbring group doesn't seem like the villainous type. Well, some anyway. And this week's ep. made me laugh at certain moments. Soifon shows her 2nd in command how much karma f-ing hurts when you lie about your position to kids from a poor district in the afterlife. Also, you're still gonna put up a story for White Day, right? Just askin. What St. Patrick's? Or April Fool's? The latter is my folks' wedding anniversary, no joke [or pun] intended.
Keep it up!
8Assault Godzilla~And the sun will set for you
The sun will set for you
And the shadow of the day
Will embrace the world in grey
And the sun will set for you~
-lyrics from Linkin Park's "Shadow of the Day"
Ah, another chapter already? Yay! ^_^ Wait, I don't know how to react... yet.
Well, it seems the project is gonna be... a lot of "fun" for some "couples." Yeah, thank God I didn't go through that whatsoever. I do pity those around the country that have to, though. Being zombified from such a task would mean more than brain damage. Speaking of which, dropping a baby on its head is no laughing matter, regardless of the circumstances. I have a younger sister with autism, and my parents and I have learned to deal with it for years. I'll admit, at times, it makes me wanna wish to be an only child, or that i have left home to live alone sooner, but I gave me an experience and perspective of how someone copes with these conditions. By all means, if a baby doll made by a former Soul Reaper to be target practice, make sure the dude gets the message. And the psycho dad that thinks it's all fun in games until an Energy arrow isn't the only thing that gets shot up his a-. "This just keeps getting better." Yes, yes it does. -_-" You think Ichigo will see his mom in the Soul Society in the future? I actually hope so.
"The apple doesn't fall far from the tree." Is a quote like that gonna be part of an upcoming chapter soon?
This week's manga chapter has Orihime being brave. And somehow losing her mind. What happens next may not be pretty. At least the Fullbring group doesn't seem like the villainous type. Well, some anyway. And this week's ep. made me laugh at certain moments. Soifon shows her 2nd in command how much karma f-ing hurts when you lie about your position to kids from a poor district in the afterlife. Also, you're still gonna put up a story for White Day, right? Just askin. What St. Patrick's? Or April Fool's? The latter is my folks' wedding anniversary, no joke [or pun] intended.
Keep it up!
3/9/2011 c2 25Dark Inu Fan
...Mine had a button on its back that you had to push with a key that was attached to your wrist with a tamper-proof band, then a sensor in a pair of diapers you had to change... Mine was just colic... very colic. At least they all have partners! I can't wait to see how their first night goes! I bet Isshin has already put a marriage bed and a bassinet in Ichigo's room! And whether Isshin gets to tell his speech to the entire class or not, he's going to tell it to at least his oldest... if he can't pin down all three (four?) kids. Keep up the good work, dark
25Dark Inu Fan...Mine had a button on its back that you had to push with a key that was attached to your wrist with a tamper-proof band, then a sensor in a pair of diapers you had to change... Mine was just colic... very colic. At least they all have partners! I can't wait to see how their first night goes! I bet Isshin has already put a marriage bed and a bassinet in Ichigo's room! And whether Isshin gets to tell his speech to the entire class or not, he's going to tell it to at least his oldest... if he can't pin down all three (four?) kids. Keep up the good work, dark
3/9/2011 c2 6Aurora Marija
This was well written and hilarious. Nuff said. I'm so glad I found this.
Oh, and I like the pairings you chose too. IshiHime is one of my all time favorites. Adding this to my watch and favorites lists.
6Aurora MarijaThis was well written and hilarious. Nuff said. I'm so glad I found this.
Oh, and I like the pairings you chose too. IshiHime is one of my all time favorites. Adding this to my watch and favorites lists.
3/9/2011 c1 14Toxic-Hibari
Hahahahaha!
Poor Ichigo, Urahara is going to make his life living hell XD
Good things: Brilliant grammar, punctuation, spelling and had the right amount of humor in it. I liked how the teacher had a smile on her face, a smile that would probbly bring them all to their doom... And the way 'Nii-san' was brough into it was funny! He belongs to the military? Hahahaha
Bad points: It was shorter than normal! You don't normally write short chapters. You also didn't have Orihime and Chad in the story either (maybe you did but a I didn't pick it up, I do that sometimes).
14Toxic-HibariHahahahaha!
Poor Ichigo, Urahara is going to make his life living hell XD
Good things: Brilliant grammar, punctuation, spelling and had the right amount of humor in it. I liked how the teacher had a smile on her face, a smile that would probbly bring them all to their doom... And the way 'Nii-san' was brough into it was funny! He belongs to the military? Hahahaha
Bad points: It was shorter than normal! You don't normally write short chapters. You also didn't have Orihime and Chad in the story either (maybe you did but a I didn't pick it up, I do that sometimes).
3/9/2011 c1 2SaviorEmmaJones
ROFL! This is going to be interesting to say the least! Couldn't remember if you said it was a one-shot or not. But you should definitely continue it! Hilarity guaranteed!
2SaviorEmmaJonesROFL! This is going to be interesting to say the least! Couldn't remember if you said it was a one-shot or not. But you should definitely continue it! Hilarity guaranteed!
3/8/2011 c1 8Assault Godzilla
Have there been moments where you're looking at something and it made you got WTF? At the moment, reading this is what it did to me, and other things (to be fair, this isn't the first story to make me feel like I lost brain cells). Disregard any stupidity I any throw at you, as I'm merely letting off any thoughts that SEEM relevant. Yeah, I highly doubt that.
I'll be honest though, you do need a break from "Saying I Will." Congrats on getting 1000+ reviews on it; starting it in Nov. and look where it is. You deserve that much praise in such short amt. of time. ^_^
Really? What. The. Fling. F-. I'm now thinkig of those cliche parental school projects I see in cartoons and comedies/dramas. For whatever reason, I thought it was some mouth-foaming way of learning sex-ed I never had went through such in grade or high school). Ok, Urahara & Ichi's dad are involved. The universe... is just plain f-ing unfair 24/7. Life's a b-tch, we all know. I'm a broken record when I say: "Fate rarely calls upon us at a moment of our choosing." It's fine when the Jesus-allegory -ss-kicking alien robot said it the first 100 times, but now, it just puts its purpose into practice this way. Ichigo and co. will have to deal any retardation an inventor and mental so-called doctor wanna educate them with. Letting a certain noble's brother know only spells COMPLETE MOTHERF-ING TROUBLE IN XXXX WAYS. I can already guess what some of the pairs will be. Fate can be cruel, and at times, it teaches its needed lessons, despite many being unorthodox. Well, I'd like to see what happens next.
Sorry for putting all that out. I just felt the urge to. I think this is a great idea, btw. Not often I read these sort of stories. Me venting like this is kinda uncalled for. I'm a single American college dude who sometimes thinks he can break some laws of physics & do the impossible, like shoot magic guns with dangerous bayonets and look like a total bad-. Insanity has either taken me, or sugar rushes I what I really need to control. Bleach manga and anime seem to be downers now that the official storyline is either done [for now] or not coming back anytime soon. You can assume what may come next. This week's ep. was disappointing, as it was about Soifon's lieutenant. Acting like he's the captain of his own squad as a fib towards some Rukongai residents he saved from a Hollow. And it made me laugh when Ichigo and Yoruichi were O_O at his predicament.
Btw, what makes the Self-Defense Force stand out? I've only heard little from them from watching Godzilla and Gamera movies. They're Japan's military, more or less, right? ...I'll wiki it later.
Keep it up!
8Assault GodzillaHave there been moments where you're looking at something and it made you got WTF? At the moment, reading this is what it did to me, and other things (to be fair, this isn't the first story to make me feel like I lost brain cells). Disregard any stupidity I any throw at you, as I'm merely letting off any thoughts that SEEM relevant. Yeah, I highly doubt that.
I'll be honest though, you do need a break from "Saying I Will." Congrats on getting 1000+ reviews on it; starting it in Nov. and look where it is. You deserve that much praise in such short amt. of time. ^_^
Really? What. The. Fling. F-. I'm now thinkig of those cliche parental school projects I see in cartoons and comedies/dramas. For whatever reason, I thought it was some mouth-foaming way of learning sex-ed I never had went through such in grade or high school). Ok, Urahara & Ichi's dad are involved. The universe... is just plain f-ing unfair 24/7. Life's a b-tch, we all know. I'm a broken record when I say: "Fate rarely calls upon us at a moment of our choosing." It's fine when the Jesus-allegory -ss-kicking alien robot said it the first 100 times, but now, it just puts its purpose into practice this way. Ichigo and co. will have to deal any retardation an inventor and mental so-called doctor wanna educate them with. Letting a certain noble's brother know only spells COMPLETE MOTHERF-ING TROUBLE IN XXXX WAYS. I can already guess what some of the pairs will be. Fate can be cruel, and at times, it teaches its needed lessons, despite many being unorthodox. Well, I'd like to see what happens next.
Sorry for putting all that out. I just felt the urge to. I think this is a great idea, btw. Not often I read these sort of stories. Me venting like this is kinda uncalled for. I'm a single American college dude who sometimes thinks he can break some laws of physics & do the impossible, like shoot magic guns with dangerous bayonets and look like a total bad-. Insanity has either taken me, or sugar rushes I what I really need to control. Bleach manga and anime seem to be downers now that the official storyline is either done [for now] or not coming back anytime soon. You can assume what may come next. This week's ep. was disappointing, as it was about Soifon's lieutenant. Acting like he's the captain of his own squad as a fib towards some Rukongai residents he saved from a Hollow. And it made me laugh when Ichigo and Yoruichi were O_O at his predicament.
Btw, what makes the Self-Defense Force stand out? I've only heard little from them from watching Godzilla and Gamera movies. They're Japan's military, more or less, right? ...I'll wiki it later.
Keep it up!
3/8/2011 c1 11Skymaster23
You might want to replace the word military, since japan only has a self-defence force. Other then that, it sounds nice.
11Skymaster23You might want to replace the word military, since japan only has a self-defence force. Other then that, it sounds nice.
3/8/2011 c1 25Dark Inu Fan
...I think... I got one of Urahara's dolls when I had to do the baby unit... And I got to play 'single parent' and I couldn't even go to the bathroom for five minutes without taking the thing with me! -shudder- Good Luck! Keep up the good work, dark
25Dark Inu Fan...I think... I got one of Urahara's dolls when I had to do the baby unit... And I got to play 'single parent' and I couldn't even go to the bathroom for five minutes without taking the thing with me! -shudder- Good Luck! Keep up the good work, dark