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5/25/2013 c1 11ForsakenMythr2012
OMG i remember that movie the saggy dog hell i didnt know that Robert played that crazy obsessed guy in the movie lol!
5/17/2013 c1 st4rgazerr
YOU'RE - YOU ARE
YOUR - IT BELONGS TO YOU
3/11/2011 c1 spockside
Very cute, but you need at least a spell check program! Or a human proofreader. If the spelling and punctuation were cleaned up it'd be easier to read. Keep it up!
3/11/2011 c1 164Marie Nomad
This has great potential. Having Pepper get a puppy sounds good but you forgot comas which is distracting. Also, it felt a little too fast. Maybe describe having Tony's feelings about the puppy. Like why he doesn't like the dog to begin with.

I recommend getting a betareader to help you.

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