for Never Would Have Thought3/25/2011 c1 bowsie22
I see the hint of slash and I like it, 'cause I like the idea of Ben/Tommy. I hope you write more :D
I see the hint of slash and I like it, 'cause I like the idea of Ben/Tommy. I hope you write more :D
3/12/2011 c1 
8Sincerely C
Very, very well written.
Your description of the doctors, their actions, and everything about the scene is astounding.
Aside from the exemption of commas in a place they could be used, which was really only a miniscule thing I've noticed, it is really a wonderful story.
8Sincerely CVery, very well written.
Your description of the doctors, their actions, and everything about the scene is astounding.
Aside from the exemption of commas in a place they could be used, which was really only a miniscule thing I've noticed, it is really a wonderful story.
3/12/2011 c1 13Amasayda
Well done - a nice introspection into Keeton's mind. Good idea to use the scenes of Lily crying her heart out in front of Tommy and Mina. Excellent writing style and wonderful choice of words.
Keep the great work up, I'd like to read more! :-)
Have a great Saturday,
K.
13AmasaydaWell done - a nice introspection into Keeton's mind. Good idea to use the scenes of Lily crying her heart out in front of Tommy and Mina. Excellent writing style and wonderful choice of words.
Keep the great work up, I'd like to read more! :-)
Have a great Saturday,
K.
3/11/2011 c1 5sunshinecutieb
woah this is really good
there arent many off the map fics yet
and nice pairing there hasnt been a lot of fuller stories
i don't really see it as slash though till the end
but i dont mind lol because i like fuller w/Mina :P
5sunshinecutiebwoah this is really good
there arent many off the map fics yet
and nice pairing there hasnt been a lot of fuller stories
i don't really see it as slash though till the end
but i dont mind lol because i like fuller w/Mina :P