for Invisible7/10/2017 c1 Guest
I love the song I was signing it for days can you tell some of your other story's
I love the song I was signing it for days can you tell some of your other story's
8/23/2011 c1 Agd also
wait... Moth plays a GUITAR!
wait... Moth plays a GUITAR!
7/22/2011 c1 
4Evil Scrapbooker
Interesting take on Moth. Although I don't necessarily agree with it, it made me see her in a different light, and it's nicely written.
4Evil ScrapbookerInteresting take on Moth. Although I don't necessarily agree with it, it made me see her in a different light, and it's nicely written.
5/8/2011 c1 43Curlscat
This is an interesting idea, though I'm unsure that it's in character for Moth. It's nice to humanize her, but you may have gone a bit too far.
43CurlscatThis is an interesting idea, though I'm unsure that it's in character for Moth. It's nice to humanize her, but you may have gone a bit too far.
5/8/2011 c1 2Elizabeth Grimm
genius! i was thinking of writing a story like this one for sabs and puck, but now i guess not... oh, well... i really like it ;) keep writing!
2Elizabeth Grimmgenius! i was thinking of writing a story like this one for sabs and puck, but now i guess not... oh, well... i really like it ;) keep writing!
3/22/2011 c1 Sgfan4life
I feel so bad for moth! :( stupid puck won't give her a chance. She's changed and he just can't face that fact! He is scared. He needs to man up! Forget Sabrina and move on! Moth is right. Sabrina sees right through puck.she doesn't want puck! Moth at least cares about him!
I feel so bad for moth! :( stupid puck won't give her a chance. She's changed and he just can't face that fact! He is scared. He needs to man up! Forget Sabrina and move on! Moth is right. Sabrina sees right through puck.she doesn't want puck! Moth at least cares about him!
3/12/2011 c1 believe-you-can
Sup! I do actually like this story! I thought it would be from Sabrina's POV at first, but nope! I do indeed feel the slightest bit sorry for Moth, but not that much, because she's kinda... evil? psycho/deranged... you get the point... anyway, maybe you could actually turn this into a story! Please? Maybe?
Sup! I do actually like this story! I thought it would be from Sabrina's POV at first, but nope! I do indeed feel the slightest bit sorry for Moth, but not that much, because she's kinda... evil? psycho/deranged... you get the point... anyway, maybe you could actually turn this into a story! Please? Maybe?
3/12/2011 c1 1earthtoabby
This was good. The ending seemed a little wierd, but this was very good.
Your story has kind of given me a new perspective on Moth. I'm actully starting to feel sorry for her. But just a little.
1earthtoabbyThis was good. The ending seemed a little wierd, but this was very good.
Your story has kind of given me a new perspective on Moth. I'm actully starting to feel sorry for her. But just a little.