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3/24 c20

10Annie Butts
Rereading for the 10000 time. I think this is my favorite Edward and Bella. Their calm and quiet is beautiful

4/19/2024 c14 sue1zide
In my opinion this Bella is too immature for this Edward.

4/18/2024 c1 sue1zide
What are their ages please?
Right now I picture the girls to be middle school age and the guys are in high school.

4/17/2024 c1 BethMasenCullen
Just came across this againso good!

2/1/2024 c20 cocotinha.rk
Simple and beautifuly written. Thanks!

1/31/2024 c12 cocotinha.rk
This was painful to read. This edward hits too close, I’m sad for bella

12/21/2023 c20 VryUnique
Great story! Very sweet. Thanks so much for sharing.

12/21/2023 c19 VryUnique
Awesome! Sweet story.

12/21/2023 c18 VryUnique
The counter sounds nice. I would like to say the house sounds nice but we
really weren't given much details.

12/21/2023 c17 VryUnique
Not too soon? Can Bella get to school easily from there?

12/21/2023 c16 VryUnique
Carlisle didn't seem too bad. I think Bella should have said more options
like writer, editor, maybe library science... whatever that is...

12/21/2023 c15 VryUnique
Dun Dun Dun...

12/21/2023 c14 VryUnique
Moving along nicely.

12/21/2023 c13 VryUnique
Nice...

12/21/2023 c12 VryUnique
Edward is a quiet loyalty. Bella wasn't wrong for wanting to know what she meant to him.

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