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2/26 c6 Devi12
I liked what I read so far, very interesting story! I feel for Murdoc on his not wanting to admit it but thinking that he'll truly be left alone if 2-D does decide to leave him. Also I find it intriguing about the cyborg's earlier showing of emotion and personality, I do wonder what she had planned and was thinking during those moments, also while she waited out on not killing the duo first hand, though maybe it was just to save them up for the boogeyman to deal with, but either way I'm interested in knowing more about that. Aside from that though, great writing! The characterization was spot on! Hopefully you can one day consider continuing this story, but it was nice none the less.
2/3/2017 c6 Ohh
PLEASE update! Xxxxx
12/5/2013 c1 9Zilkenian
I'm sorry I said that.
I'll wait for this story if you continue it. Just take your time. I'll wait.
12/3/2013 c6 Zilkenian
You are not going to continue this, right?
If you did, I would put it into my favourites and follow it. But Im afraid I won't. Sorry, hate unfinished GOOD stories
4/28/2013 c6 Guest
More? Please?
4/10/2012 c6 8Kukapetal
lol, I was wondering why "Discarded" was suddenly getting more traffic and subscriptions despite my not having worked on it in months! Much obliged for the mention and I'm flattered it inspired you :)

Anyway, I felt SO bad for 2D here! I wanted to pick him up and give him a hug. Poor thing's just in terrible shape. I hope he can manage to keep going...and that Boogie doesn't do anything too terrible to him when he and Murdoc finally meet up with him.

Loved how you did the same scene from both 2D and Murdoc's perspective. Wonderful contrast of two characters' personalities and knowledge of the situation.

Nice work!

P.S. It's "Los Angeles" :P
4/7/2012 c6 JustAGorillazFan-Girl
Russel Hobbes Im ashamed of you That you won't Help out your Bandmates Noodle Loves 2D but you know what he is with Murdoc and is still alive yet you don't care T_T Noodle please come back they may have not come for you but MAKE A CHOICE -_T RUSSEL PLEASE DON'T MAKE ME GET DEL OUT OF YOU!
3/2/2012 c5 Kukapetal
Awww, poor Russel! It's good to see him though, and I really like how you handled his angst. You got the point across while not bogging the writing down by being over the top (a problem I struggle with). I'm also liking how you're deviating from the original plot. It's fine to work with what you've been given, but it's also fun to go in a new direction too.

Keep it up! :)
3/1/2012 c5 anon66
You updated~ Excuse me while I do a little dance.

Can't really explain how much I love your interpretation of Russel's line of thought. I always liked the giant drummer~

I understood that he felt the need to take revenge at 2D and Murdoc and won't blame him for thinking like that, at all. Actually it would be interesting if he DID actually manage to get to Plastic Beach without finding out that Noodle is alive... Gawd I've watched too many horror movies -.- Well, back to this chapter. Russel was perfect. Don't let anybody tell you that Russ is OOC, because how I see it, this might've been the original story line if certain events had happened (and if the authors were as creative as you).

So glad you're not neglecting Russ completely, though, even if Mudz and 2D are my favourite characters personality wise ~ There's a lot of authors that completely forget about Russ. I find that sad, even if he isn't as amusing as Mudz and 2D...

Actually, this inspires me a lot. Maybe I'll do a Gorillaz fanfiction one day? Who knows. I can only hope I'll come up with a good 'nuff plot, like ya did!

I'll continue reading & reviewing, so please keep updating!

... I think I'll go fangirl quietly in a corner while waiting for the next chapter. By your A/N, I got the impression MURDOC and 2D will be in the next chapter. GTUHWITGHWRUIGH can't wait *humps your foot*

Oh, and second note, excuse me for any spelling & grammar mistakes~ English isn't my second, or third language :c
2/26/2012 c4 anon66
This is... awesome.

It's so delightful to finally find a Gorillaz fanfic that doesn't have romance in it (not that there's anything wrong with romance, but...) and who have both Murdoc and 2D completely in character. Especially since I love both equally~

Keep up the good work, pleae~ This has such a great plot and I'm eager to see what's gonna happen next!
1/2/2012 c4 Kukapetal
Oh no, they didn't get away after all!

Lol, poor Cyborg. She's always the villain in everyone's fics, it seems :P

Anyway, I really loved the characterization! I love how you write 2D. You really capture his simplistic thinking process without making him come across as too childlike. I've always had trouble writing him, but you did a great job! Murdoc was great too...it was nice to see that he may want 2D around...well, a little at least. And it's nice to see that he might actually feel BAD about all the crappy things he's done.

Again, really great chapter and I can't wait to find out what's in store for the poor guys. Hope it's not too bad! :P
5/13/2011 c3 Luvinthis
Great story!
4/1/2011 c3 7Spazzy Bunny
ello luv-

good chapter very good. Just a question. i dunno if i just missed it but how did they know earlier the beach was going to blow up before it did? Other than that very good, very very good :)
3/30/2011 c3 8Kukapetal
Lol, looks like you won the race :P

But I was so excited to see a new chapter today! And it was full of action, and I loved it :D It's always nice to see something from 2D's POV as well...I like how you wrote him, sinc it's hard to find a happy medium between making him sound simplistic and making him sound like an idiot. But you managed just fine.

The plot is definitely thickening though...cyborg's behavior makes me think she was never trying to blow them up in the first place, but rather, just trying to make them leave the island. Murdoc's behavior with the book made me wonder as well. Did he get possessed by Boogie? Or maybe it's Boogie in disguise! I guess I'll have to wait and see.

Once again, great job!

Also, is Tatoo that guy who stands by the elevator? 'Cause he's annoying and I hope he got blown up :P
3/18/2011 c2 me
awesome! your use of words is amazingly precise, so many people are so careless

keep it up
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