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2/18/2013 c1 
2k+HawkiConcept has promise, but the info is simply an info-dump. Show, don't tell.
9/27/2012 c1 13ShadeKitteh301I like the characters and cannot wait for the next bit of the story.
3/23/2011 c1 CethlennLooking forward to seeing the rest of it.
Good job so far!
3/14/2011 c1 31AuraleeYay, I'm a lieutenant! Score!
Good first start-remember, you can email me any ?s about BLADE! I am sooooo psyched that someone elset hinks she's worth a story. :)
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