for Harry Potter and The Phoenix Burning6/19 c20 
2Therio
I have read this story 3 or 4 times now since it first came out and still enjoy it very much. It is too bad the sequel was never finished.
2TherioI have read this story 3 or 4 times now since it first came out and still enjoy it very much. It is too bad the sequel was never finished.
5/29 c20 hdres
A really imaginative and interesting story. I am sorry you never got to finish. I would have enjoyed seeing what differences Harry had made already. Thank you for sharing your story.
A really imaginative and interesting story. I am sorry you never got to finish. I would have enjoyed seeing what differences Harry had made already. Thank you for sharing your story.
5/5 c11 FotoDi
Harry should have asked Harold (or Charlus) Lord Potter if Dumbledore was allowed to view his memories. The DMLE did not take a copy. Is your AU time traveling Harry Potter. Parselmouth?
Does James already have the Peverell cloak? Why haven’t the Potters run a paternity blood test on Harry? Dorea Potter née Black is not only from a Dark Family, but she is the quintessential Slytherin.
Harry should have asked Harold (or Charlus) Lord Potter if Dumbledore was allowed to view his memories. The DMLE did not take a copy. Is your AU time traveling Harry Potter. Parselmouth?
Does James already have the Peverell cloak? Why haven’t the Potters run a paternity blood test on Harry? Dorea Potter née Black is not only from a Dark Family, but she is the quintessential Slytherin.
12/29/2022 c9 Stormzy
Not a bad work. I knew because of the low word count (in comparison with other HP works) it would have a lot of rushed negatives. However as I knew they were inevitable, reading around them isn't too bad. Only actual negative I would say is that you had Harry's mindset reversed to a literal child. Not pretending to be a child in certain cases like other works, but literally having the mind of a child. It's pretty weird to be honest and its clearly allowed you to make the work exaggeratingly "angsty" which is such a bore to read through.
Not a bad work. I knew because of the low word count (in comparison with other HP works) it would have a lot of rushed negatives. However as I knew they were inevitable, reading around them isn't too bad. Only actual negative I would say is that you had Harry's mindset reversed to a literal child. Not pretending to be a child in certain cases like other works, but literally having the mind of a child. It's pretty weird to be honest and its clearly allowed you to make the work exaggeratingly "angsty" which is such a bore to read through.
12/13/2022 c20 Ella1910
I adore this story. The lighthearted tone of it, while also covering deeper topics, is compelling.
I adore this story. The lighthearted tone of it, while also covering deeper topics, is compelling.
8/25/2022 c8 Chaiiiii
OHHHHH OMG, i mean yeah that sucks for Harry cause he have everything he wanted. To just be Harry, and suddenly Voldemort came in killing muggles looking for him
OHHHHH OMG, i mean yeah that sucks for Harry cause he have everything he wanted. To just be Harry, and suddenly Voldemort came in killing muggles looking for him