7/12/2012 c3 18Seriefila
Hahahaha You should have make the Doctor say his typical phrase when Captain Jack Harkness appears and flirt with someone 'Doctor: Oh, stop it! Captain Jack: I was just saying hello!' That would have been VERY funny, taking into account the situation Jack-Reneesme.
Ok, Hope you write soon the next chapter, see ya later! :)
Hahahaha You should have make the Doctor say his typical phrase when Captain Jack Harkness appears and flirt with someone 'Doctor: Oh, stop it! Captain Jack: I was just saying hello!' That would have been VERY funny, taking into account the situation Jack-Reneesme.
Ok, Hope you write soon the next chapter, see ya later! :)
5/28/2012 c3 Evermore Pond
I love your Fan Fiction it vary good please write more please please please please!
I love your Fan Fiction it vary good please write more please please please please!
9/16/2011 c3 44HestiaRue14
Jack/renessme thing moved a bit quick and seemed boarderline pedo but it was still a great chapter I'd just go a bit slower on some of your pairings I mean he said like 2 sentences and she already liked him!
Jack/renessme thing moved a bit quick and seemed boarderline pedo but it was still a great chapter I'd just go a bit slower on some of your pairings I mean he said like 2 sentences and she already liked him!
8/13/2011 c2 Guest
great chapter but the swaping between people is getting confusing. maybe just stick to 1 or 2. over all its a great story
great chapter but the swaping between people is getting confusing. maybe just stick to 1 or 2. over all its a great story
7/13/2011 c3 SakuraDragomir
hey waz up
can u write more of this story plz? if u can
i love doctor who and twilight
i hope i can read more of ur stories
ttyl
-yuuki kuran
queen of the night
hey waz up
can u write more of this story plz? if u can
i love doctor who and twilight
i hope i can read more of ur stories
ttyl
-yuuki kuran
queen of the night
5/2/2011 c2 1CyanideDeductions
i read the first story and i found it amazing! i cant wait for another chapter, Jack is definetly going to be awesome in this story!
i read the first story and i found it amazing! i cant wait for another chapter, Jack is definetly going to be awesome in this story!
3/26/2011 c2 5jcdteenagedream5913
1: Great chapter! 2: You thought Ianto was spelled (spelt?) Lanto? Lol. 3: Ianto, oh Ianto, nothing rhymes with Ianto...now have that stuck in my head.
1: Great chapter! 2: You thought Ianto was spelled (spelt?) Lanto? Lol. 3: Ianto, oh Ianto, nothing rhymes with Ianto...now have that stuck in my head.
3/25/2011 c2 5Bookworm213
its up its up its up if you need more ideas just ask cuz ive got alot im like a well of ideas for this story. i cant wait for the next chapter to be up to read what will happen even though i will probly help you come up with it. right now im type happy i cant stop typing.
its up its up its up if you need more ideas just ask cuz ive got alot im like a well of ideas for this story. i cant wait for the next chapter to be up to read what will happen even though i will probly help you come up with it. right now im type happy i cant stop typing.
3/20/2011 c1 Bookworm213
its up finally i love it a lot lot lot but and im super excited but ive already told you that do the next chapter soon if your out of ideas for this story just ask because ive got plentey
its up finally i love it a lot lot lot but and im super excited but ive already told you that do the next chapter soon if your out of ideas for this story just ask because ive got plentey