for Lost5/13/2011 c1 
1Foxxy5511
i am like reading all your stories once again they are interesting and the story plot seems good update plzzzz!
1Foxxy5511i am like reading all your stories once again they are interesting and the story plot seems good update plzzzz!
5/6/2011 c1 5Lanky Nathan
Well now... You have a unique way of portraying emotions through your stories. It's strange... I get the feeling of the story, even if the words don't make all that much sense. Not so much this one, but your other stories. I like it, but it's a hard style of writing to keep going for long periods no? Correct me if I'm wrong but that's why all your stories are under 1000 words yeah?
In any case, while you do have talent, you need to market yourself better to get more reviews. A 3 or 4 line summary may sound mysterious and give off the vibe you want, but many people can't be bothered to look that deep into a summary. You should also try write longer chapters. While there is nothing wrong with your stuff, I personally browse straight over the small, single chapter stories unless they have a captivating summary.
So what I'm saying is perhapse try a different method for your next story. You have a way with conveying emotion through words, so now try put that into a story with more filling words. You liked that DBZ storie I wrote, so why not try use that as a basic guideline? Do that and maybe try to make it a multichapter story and see how many reviews you get then. I'm sure you'll be pleasantly surprised =)
5Lanky NathanWell now... You have a unique way of portraying emotions through your stories. It's strange... I get the feeling of the story, even if the words don't make all that much sense. Not so much this one, but your other stories. I like it, but it's a hard style of writing to keep going for long periods no? Correct me if I'm wrong but that's why all your stories are under 1000 words yeah?
In any case, while you do have talent, you need to market yourself better to get more reviews. A 3 or 4 line summary may sound mysterious and give off the vibe you want, but many people can't be bothered to look that deep into a summary. You should also try write longer chapters. While there is nothing wrong with your stuff, I personally browse straight over the small, single chapter stories unless they have a captivating summary.
So what I'm saying is perhapse try a different method for your next story. You have a way with conveying emotion through words, so now try put that into a story with more filling words. You liked that DBZ storie I wrote, so why not try use that as a basic guideline? Do that and maybe try to make it a multichapter story and see how many reviews you get then. I'm sure you'll be pleasantly surprised =)
4/17/2011 c1 Gskenbrvd
I always loved the moments when people saw Naruto for who he was and what he was about rather the random dumb things he does. Dying for one's friends and never giving up in the face of what would keep you from doing what is right... Seems like a perfectly good reason to live to me.
While your stories may not be long or have much meaning to some, I can see you have a love of Naruto that can't be summarized by a single review. Anyone can write a review on something grand, it's an easy task. But seeing the beauty in the small things is where you can see how much of a fan someone really is. I commend you for writing from the heart regardless of what some may say or how many reviews you have.
I'm happy to see someone who shares a love for Naruto like mine!
CBUnderoath50
I always loved the moments when people saw Naruto for who he was and what he was about rather the random dumb things he does. Dying for one's friends and never giving up in the face of what would keep you from doing what is right... Seems like a perfectly good reason to live to me.
While your stories may not be long or have much meaning to some, I can see you have a love of Naruto that can't be summarized by a single review. Anyone can write a review on something grand, it's an easy task. But seeing the beauty in the small things is where you can see how much of a fan someone really is. I commend you for writing from the heart regardless of what some may say or how many reviews you have.
I'm happy to see someone who shares a love for Naruto like mine!
CBUnderoath50