for Alone5/26/2013 c3 Guest
great
great
1/31/2013 c5 Rose Tyler
Please keep going its really good
Please keep going its really good
1/27/2013 c5 
3Clyll the Deathless
Hey :) lack of inspiration ;) ? I'm not much of a writer myself, but you could make a list of all the things Reid's going to be affected by, eg, cabin fever, drug addiction, PTSD etc. and then make a list of symptoms and treatments or something. When you bring Reid back into his life you can cover several things at once over the course of a couple of chapters eg, Reid struggles to adjust and function normal in society (freaks out at a trip to store); maybe he starts to isolate himself, and refuse to go back to work atm. He might, as a symptom, be really conflicted, and push his teammates and friends away, and alternatively cling desperately to them. He also may struggle with his drug addiction. Then bring in the new characters (psychologist and psychiatrist) etc, and build things up as Reid's problems escalate, and his friends try and help. But you should decide the ultimate ending to your story, and work your way there slowly. Hopefully it helped (and made a bit of sense :s) happy writing :)
3Clyll the DeathlessHey :) lack of inspiration ;) ? I'm not much of a writer myself, but you could make a list of all the things Reid's going to be affected by, eg, cabin fever, drug addiction, PTSD etc. and then make a list of symptoms and treatments or something. When you bring Reid back into his life you can cover several things at once over the course of a couple of chapters eg, Reid struggles to adjust and function normal in society (freaks out at a trip to store); maybe he starts to isolate himself, and refuse to go back to work atm. He might, as a symptom, be really conflicted, and push his teammates and friends away, and alternatively cling desperately to them. He also may struggle with his drug addiction. Then bring in the new characters (psychologist and psychiatrist) etc, and build things up as Reid's problems escalate, and his friends try and help. But you should decide the ultimate ending to your story, and work your way there slowly. Hopefully it helped (and made a bit of sense :s) happy writing :)