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3/17/2011 c5 30Sage1988
Very teasing scene between the two girls I must say but still very good

Nice describtion of the arrangement of the girls in St Trinians and good interplay between them all
3/17/2011 c4 Sage1988
Good portrayal of Kelly's POV during the makeover; the way you set up a romantic angle is great but still believable

Good reason for swapping schools and setting up the reason for fighting between Annabelle and Verity
3/17/2011 c3 Sage1988
Good chapter, a bit short but still well written
3/17/2011 c2 Sage1988
Nicely tied into the movie and continues the development started in the previous chapter.

Great continuation
3/17/2011 c1 Sage1988
Very detailed and interesting start to the relationship between Annabelle and Kelly and showing Annabelle's development from timid to tough and the real Chelsea and not just stick to the stereotypical image

Very good story so far and will read the next chapter post haste
3/16/2011 c6 POCisTheName
This story is Amazing! i love it. i hope you do more writing
3/15/2011 c6 5Undone Misdeeds
I loved it! Every word was brilliant. You should most definitely carry it on, or do a sequel. Maybe something about Kelly leaving or Annabelle becoming head girl. It was a good read though, and i hope to see more from you. :)
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