for A holiday with destiny7/14/2016 c11 
10Junior VB
El fic necesita un poco de trabajo pero no está mal.
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The fic needs some work but not bad.
10Junior VBEl fic necesita un poco de trabajo pero no está mal.
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The fic needs some work but not bad.
4/2/2016 c3 DragonHeart
Really? U spelled "Baltor's" name wrong. It's VALTOR. NOT Baltor. Plus Valtor is not the the only prob u made... U made bad punctuation when people were talking and spelled some wrong. No offense, but u are TERRIBLE at fanfiction
Really? U spelled "Baltor's" name wrong. It's VALTOR. NOT Baltor. Plus Valtor is not the the only prob u made... U made bad punctuation when people were talking and spelled some wrong. No offense, but u are TERRIBLE at fanfiction
2/28/2014 c11 Guest
I 3 ur fanfics
I 3 ur fanfics
4/10/2013 c4 Guest
bloom is not the leader just the main character
bloom is not the leader just the main character
4/10/2013 c3 Guest
people with brown hair are called brunettes
people with brown hair are called brunettes
4/29/2011 c8 keiko
plz update soon
plz update soon
4/18/2011 c7 vaniti
impresive this is really good and I definetly enjoyed...I can't wait for whats gonna happen next =) I will spread word around about your story cuz it deserves some credit...
impresive this is really good and I definetly enjoyed...I can't wait for whats gonna happen next =) I will spread word around about your story cuz it deserves some credit...