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2/27/2019 c22 Vadercat
Great story! But I waited 23 chapters for the great love scene at the end and it was so tame it was disappointing. Don't lead your reader up so much in other chapters to let them fall by the wayside. I wanted to read Callen's moves on Luce. You don't have to be overly graphic to get the picture.
6/5/2014 c22 klt1
Aww a beautifully written ending! Loved this from the first chapter to the last chapter xxx
10/24/2013 c22 1angel897
fun and enjoyable story to read :)
10/23/2013 c4 angel897
fun chapter to read
11/5/2012 c22 24Soccer-Bitch
Loved the story! Very well done!
10/15/2012 c22 Guest
Great ending to a great story!
10/15/2012 c18 Guest
Well written - her daddy is a bad man ;-)
10/15/2012 c17 Guest
Both of these people have amazing restraint! The action scenes coupled with the will-they-or-won't-they scenes is making this story a pleasure to read :-)
10/15/2012 c16 Guest
Loved the interaction between Deeks' and Callen.
10/15/2012 c15 Guest
Callen is so sweet :-)
10/14/2012 c14 17SnoopGirl69
Sam/Callen friendship/partnership wonderful in this this story:

"How do you two work together?"

"Rather effectively apparently," Callen replied as he heard a car pull up.
10/14/2012 c13 SnoopGirl69
"So what would you like me to do with you instead?" Callen asked.

You have to ask? LOL

Great blend of action and sweet fluffy stuff in this story :-)
10/14/2012 c12 SnoopGirl69
"Not five or six either Sam," he barked a little harshly. Sam's timing was lousy.

Yes it is :-)
10/14/2012 c9 SnoopGirl69
Each chapter is more enticing than the next!
10/14/2012 c8 SnoopGirl69
Loved this line! :

Callen her gaze with his eyes and held it. "I have a lot I want to do with you," he said softly and watched as her eyes went slightly wider and a dusting of pink flared on her cheeks. "Killing is most definitely not on that list."

Like how you have written Deeks' relationship with Lucy
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