Reviews: Loss of Control

4/27/2021 c1 Guest
Please write more it very good

10/20/2020 c1 fanfictionalcolic
Wow

3/17/2019 c1 SanguineTaurean
All that is good and holy...bajeebus...hot dang! I don’t care that it is weird to be jealous of a fictional character! I need to reread this again. And again.

3/17/2018 c1

12tawelephant
Hot damn.

3/17/2018 c1 CSG
I'd say you made the right decision. I run "The Twilight Fan Fiction Finders." Feel free to post your updates in there, if you want to. Thanks for sharing this with us. I enjoyed it.

3/17/2018 c1 nzjojo
Awesome story very well written - I could imagine it all! Thank you :)

10/10/2016 c1 debslmac
:):)

7/18/2016 c1 jenna grey
Love this! Thank you! It's always interesting to see both perspectives.

3/11/2016 c1 michigangal0223
hot hot

9/14/2015 c1 NanStew
Wow, what a beginning. Going to read the rest now. Love it.

9/2/2015 c1

8Sassyvampmama
Oh yummy! Thanks for sharing.

8/21/2015 c1 dpennell007
Very nice! I Love how Edward is such a talker. And how they barely made it in the door.

5/8/2015 c1 KimiD
Holy Shite~! Well, they finally introduced themselves... LOL

2/21/2015 c1 2loveybunnies
Wow, that was hot, and Bella barely said a word! Wish there was more, I would really like to know about these characters...what is Edward's deal? Will they see each other again? I know this is years old, but I would love more!

2/15/2015 c1 Treestar2509
Damn, that was HOT! Great job! I would have never guessed it was your first lemon. Well done. I wish there was more. Thanks for sharing.

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