for Memento Mori Bad Latin6/15/2011 c1 DavidKarofsky
This was touching, I hope Finn and Dave develop a friendship on the show because Dave is going to need all the support he can get.
This was touching, I hope Finn and Dave develop a friendship on the show because Dave is going to need all the support he can get.
4/29/2011 c1 Cheyenne
Please continue this story. Write about Finn going to talk to Kurt. Write about Kurt's thoughts after Finn tells him about what he just went through with Karofsky. I've never liked Blaine so maybe you can follow up on what you implied in this story that Blaine has a chrush on a new guy every five seconds. Maybe have Blaine like a new person and break up with Kurt and then have Finn see this as a new opportunuity for Karofksy. Do whatever you feel would be good, just please continue this story.
Please continue this story. Write about Finn going to talk to Kurt. Write about Kurt's thoughts after Finn tells him about what he just went through with Karofsky. I've never liked Blaine so maybe you can follow up on what you implied in this story that Blaine has a chrush on a new guy every five seconds. Maybe have Blaine like a new person and break up with Kurt and then have Finn see this as a new opportunuity for Karofksy. Do whatever you feel would be good, just please continue this story.
4/13/2011 c1 
1miikkuli
This is just what I was looking for! I needed something where Karofsky is being angsty and Finn finds out about everything, and at the end a tiny ray of hope. Perfect! I don't need to look anymore. ^^
1miikkuliThis is just what I was looking for! I needed something where Karofsky is being angsty and Finn finds out about everything, and at the end a tiny ray of hope. Perfect! I don't need to look anymore. ^^
3/20/2011 c1 kaito
oh, i'm such a big fan of finn/dave's friendship. also i hope dave'd be happy in the end. btw i don't really think it's love between kurt & blaine. nah, seriously after all this time and just after 1 song smth like "i've been looking 4 u 4 ages?" it's freaking weird =) p.s. really like ur fic =) it's just awesome:)
oh, i'm such a big fan of finn/dave's friendship. also i hope dave'd be happy in the end. btw i don't really think it's love between kurt & blaine. nah, seriously after all this time and just after 1 song smth like "i've been looking 4 u 4 ages?" it's freaking weird =) p.s. really like ur fic =) it's just awesome:)
3/17/2011 c1 9Riot-Angel
please write a sequel...this is just so good and poor David,he deserves a second chance!
9Riot-Angelplease write a sequel...this is just so good and poor David,he deserves a second chance!
3/17/2011 c1 63dorydafish
Aww this was breaking my little heart. I'm so anxious about the next two episodes. If the writers don't handle Dave with care I may have to stop watching all together.
The Superbowl Ep has made me want Finn to be the one to find out Dave's secret first. I really hope their 'friendship' has blossomed off screen and that they haven't gone back to hating each other.
'The last wheel clicked into place and he stood, frozen, just staring as Karofsky melted down at Finn's feet."You didn't hate Kurt, did you," he asked, his voice an awed whisper and his belly cold.' - That little bit made me tingle all over, I would just love it if we could see that on screen. I can just picture Cory's face at that moment! It would be such an epic moment!
whereas '"No!" Karofsky's shout echoed off the empty locker room walls. He slammed his head back against the metal lockers, face red and chest heaving. "No, no, no!" He was shaking his head, eyes wide, expression tortured.' - this just made my heart bleed for Dave. From what I've seen I do think he likes Kurt regardless of some people saying that he only kissed kurt to 'announce' his gayness.
'"Dude," he said, waiting until Karofsky flinched so he was sure he'd heard. "That guy is a flake. One minute he's gay, the next minute he's bi, he's crushing on someone new every five seconds and right now he's onto Kurt."' - THIS IS SO TRUE! Even though I don't hate Klaine, I'm kinda glad they rushed it all in one episode...it makes me think that it isn't going to last...maybe it's just wishful thinking but still :P
'He didn't know, he just knew that if he were right, if all of this had been because of love, that had to count for something.' - IT HAS TO COUNT FOR SOMETHING! Unless it wasn't out of love and it was just some strange moment Dave had...which would be a total cop-out to keep all the klainers happy...
Thanks so much for posting this! As always I love anything you write involving Karofsky :D
DDF
XXX
63dorydafishAww this was breaking my little heart. I'm so anxious about the next two episodes. If the writers don't handle Dave with care I may have to stop watching all together.
The Superbowl Ep has made me want Finn to be the one to find out Dave's secret first. I really hope their 'friendship' has blossomed off screen and that they haven't gone back to hating each other.
'The last wheel clicked into place and he stood, frozen, just staring as Karofsky melted down at Finn's feet."You didn't hate Kurt, did you," he asked, his voice an awed whisper and his belly cold.' - That little bit made me tingle all over, I would just love it if we could see that on screen. I can just picture Cory's face at that moment! It would be such an epic moment!
whereas '"No!" Karofsky's shout echoed off the empty locker room walls. He slammed his head back against the metal lockers, face red and chest heaving. "No, no, no!" He was shaking his head, eyes wide, expression tortured.' - this just made my heart bleed for Dave. From what I've seen I do think he likes Kurt regardless of some people saying that he only kissed kurt to 'announce' his gayness.
'"Dude," he said, waiting until Karofsky flinched so he was sure he'd heard. "That guy is a flake. One minute he's gay, the next minute he's bi, he's crushing on someone new every five seconds and right now he's onto Kurt."' - THIS IS SO TRUE! Even though I don't hate Klaine, I'm kinda glad they rushed it all in one episode...it makes me think that it isn't going to last...maybe it's just wishful thinking but still :P
'He didn't know, he just knew that if he were right, if all of this had been because of love, that had to count for something.' - IT HAS TO COUNT FOR SOMETHING! Unless it wasn't out of love and it was just some strange moment Dave had...which would be a total cop-out to keep all the klainers happy...
Thanks so much for posting this! As always I love anything you write involving Karofsky :D
DDF
XXX
3/17/2011 c1 138Gothicthundra
L-O-V-E-D IT! Simply awesome... ironically enough my friend said the exact thing about Blaine (and she's a Klaine freak) she was like "Next week he'll like Dave and then the plot twists will get crazy love square and shiz" (her exact words, lol.)
138GothicthundraL-O-V-E-D IT! Simply awesome... ironically enough my friend said the exact thing about Blaine (and she's a Klaine freak) she was like "Next week he'll like Dave and then the plot twists will get crazy love square and shiz" (her exact words, lol.)
3/17/2011 c1 Lynn-at-home
I know it's a oneshot, but it can't stay that way, okay?
This is good stuff, and it can't end here, I just will not have it. So there!
I know it's a oneshot, but it can't stay that way, okay?
This is good stuff, and it can't end here, I just will not have it. So there!
3/17/2011 c1 1xanman
Ooooooh. Lovely! You got both guys' voices bang on... Poor Dave. And yeah Finn! He's got a good heart. Really hope RIB develop this friendship. Barring that, keep writing! Cheers.
1xanmanOoooooh. Lovely! You got both guys' voices bang on... Poor Dave. And yeah Finn! He's got a good heart. Really hope RIB develop this friendship. Barring that, keep writing! Cheers.
3/17/2011 c1 Aetheriata
This is heartbreaking...
I am so much for Finn/Dave bonding on the show and a scene like this would be perfect.
I hope you can write more of this!
(And yes, I am with you/Finn on this: Blaine's a flake -.-)
This is heartbreaking...
I am so much for Finn/Dave bonding on the show and a scene like this would be perfect.
I hope you can write more of this!
(And yes, I am with you/Finn on this: Blaine's a flake -.-)
3/16/2011 c1 319Dreaming-Of-A-Nightmare
Fave Hudosky bonding? YES PLZ.
calling Blaine a flake? MOAR YES PLZ!
this oneshot overall? A WORLD FULL OF 'YES.'
;D
319Dreaming-Of-A-NightmareFave Hudosky bonding? YES PLZ.
calling Blaine a flake? MOAR YES PLZ!
this oneshot overall? A WORLD FULL OF 'YES.'
;D