
4/3/2011 c2
9haleyskywalker2
HAhahahaha I coul see Leia letting mara loose on Han!
Poor Wes i wonder how bad his girlfriend looked.
I cant see Luke doing that to poor chewie.
Please continue :D

HAhahahaha I coul see Leia letting mara loose on Han!
Poor Wes i wonder how bad his girlfriend looked.
I cant see Luke doing that to poor chewie.
Please continue :D
3/22/2011 c1
3Booknerd101
I like how you can tell who's speaking even when they don't say their name.
Especially Yoda. Goes without saying.
Suggestion: Make it longer. And it's a bit dubious how one missed call sparked a whole investigation. Okay, quite a few missed calls. But really. And why would Padme want Anakin to mention the marriage in the recording? It's a secret... And Padme isn't that clingy. ... Is she?
Psh, and Palpatine would TOTALLY leave a Sithy voice message for Anakin to 'join the dark side'. Haha. Nice one. You could go places with this.

I like how you can tell who's speaking even when they don't say their name.
Especially Yoda. Goes without saying.
Suggestion: Make it longer. And it's a bit dubious how one missed call sparked a whole investigation. Okay, quite a few missed calls. But really. And why would Padme want Anakin to mention the marriage in the recording? It's a secret... And Padme isn't that clingy. ... Is she?
Psh, and Palpatine would TOTALLY leave a Sithy voice message for Anakin to 'join the dark side'. Haha. Nice one. You could go places with this.
3/17/2011 c1
9haleyskywalker2
interesting this is, very interesting... -strokes white beard that i dont have-
please continue..or continue you must

interesting this is, very interesting... -strokes white beard that i dont have-
please continue..or continue you must