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3/23/2011 c1 2Stay Groovy
Brilliant. You did a great job. Awesome story.
3/18/2011 c1 Bookworm41
Great job. I like how you brought Much Allen and John together, it would have been a very important point in there trip back.
3/17/2011 c1 3manxcatmom
Interesting scene between Allan and Much, and John. Much had no idea what would happen to Allan after he told him to "jigger off!", did he? (That "Gotcha!" moment between Allan and Guy in the tavern is one of my favorites!)

I really understood Allan in your story-I've always thought, too, that he must have felt abandoned by the gang when a whole day went by and no one tried to find him.

I also like that you show Much ashamed that they didn't try to find Allan. His thought, "maybe if we had..."

Good ending, too.

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