for Lies and Hidden Secrets1/18/2020 c53 Guest
i've just read this all in one go and jesus christ... my heart
i've just read this all in one go and jesus christ... my heart
6/7/2012 c53 
6scarletpoppy
Its 11:30pm and all my family have wondered into my room to see if i was ok from all the crying they kept hearing. I think they were surprised to see me staring at my laptop.
I really had to compose my self even to attempt to write this review, although how im typing through my tears is beyond me
this story is so beautifully written- the emotion is so pure and fragile- its wonderful!
Im not sure whether to love or hate this story. I love it because i think u have the characters perfect, and the plot is so amazing, the decriptions are hauntingly angelic, and i havent been in love with a piece of writing in ages
and yet i hate it so much, i wish nikki and harry and leo never had to go through any of it, i wish no one had to feel those things- but i know people do, which is why its so dreadful
so anyway- please become an author and/or write so happy sw fics ;-) thank you so much for this story
P x
6scarletpoppyIts 11:30pm and all my family have wondered into my room to see if i was ok from all the crying they kept hearing. I think they were surprised to see me staring at my laptop.
I really had to compose my self even to attempt to write this review, although how im typing through my tears is beyond me
this story is so beautifully written- the emotion is so pure and fragile- its wonderful!
Im not sure whether to love or hate this story. I love it because i think u have the characters perfect, and the plot is so amazing, the decriptions are hauntingly angelic, and i havent been in love with a piece of writing in ages
and yet i hate it so much, i wish nikki and harry and leo never had to go through any of it, i wish no one had to feel those things- but i know people do, which is why its so dreadful
so anyway- please become an author and/or write so happy sw fics ;-) thank you so much for this story
P x
5/23/2012 c53 Lottee13
Woow this was amazing! I cried the whole time during the last 5 chapters... The tears were streaming down my face! It was really sad but also beautiful xxx Lotte
Woow this was amazing! I cried the whole time during the last 5 chapters... The tears were streaming down my face! It was really sad but also beautiful xxx Lotte
5/6/2012 c53 charliecharlie
wow! I know its a while since you finished this but I felt I needed to leave a review anyway...I only started reading this story about a week ago and I've been hooked! Its such a great story and so emotionally and amazingly written, especially the last few chapters, which had me in tears! I really didn't want Nikki to die, kept hoping for a miracle, but realised that she was going to die anyway! really really well done for writing this, it is amazing!
wow! I know its a while since you finished this but I felt I needed to leave a review anyway...I only started reading this story about a week ago and I've been hooked! Its such a great story and so emotionally and amazingly written, especially the last few chapters, which had me in tears! I really didn't want Nikki to die, kept hoping for a miracle, but realised that she was going to die anyway! really really well done for writing this, it is amazing!
4/29/2012 c53 8Baibe
My gosh, I have never cried so hard at a story. You even managed to overtake my tears when Dobby died, it was like the notebook in fic form. Towards the end I was scared to go on to the next chapter just in case, but when she asked for a story I had to pause for a moment and compose myself before I could actually read the rest. This is amazingly written, a truly beautiful piece. Now I must go and think of happy things...
8BaibeMy gosh, I have never cried so hard at a story. You even managed to overtake my tears when Dobby died, it was like the notebook in fic form. Towards the end I was scared to go on to the next chapter just in case, but when she asked for a story I had to pause for a moment and compose myself before I could actually read the rest. This is amazingly written, a truly beautiful piece. Now I must go and think of happy things...
4/14/2012 c53 14Cariad1987
ok wow Im fighting back tears that was so beautifully written it was heartbreakingly sad but in such a sweet way it made me smile ant just tear up
14Cariad1987ok wow Im fighting back tears that was so beautifully written it was heartbreakingly sad but in such a sweet way it made me smile ant just tear up
10/19/2011 c53 doctorwho-fanatic2010
:( very sad, cried! any new happy stories on the horizon? thanks for writing
:( very sad, cried! any new happy stories on the horizon? thanks for writing
10/16/2011 c53 17pinkswallowsun
How such a sad ending can still feel so perfectly fitting, I don't know :) I cried (lots!) of course, but it still feels right somehow, like she's peaceful now and so in a strange sort of way it's OK that she;s gone. Not that I'm completely sucked in! I loved that last little bit told from Leo's point of view, it worked so well as he kind of told the story in a way, guided us through, and he's the perfect person to pull it all together :) Poor Harry :( How he's going to live without Nikki I don't know, but that ending was just so perfect that I wouldn't have wanted it any other way :) Congratulations on a fantastic piece of work, hope to read more from you very soon (even if you choose to kill Harry next time, I'll still read it! Love your fics :)
Love Flossie xxx
17pinkswallowsunHow such a sad ending can still feel so perfectly fitting, I don't know :) I cried (lots!) of course, but it still feels right somehow, like she's peaceful now and so in a strange sort of way it's OK that she;s gone. Not that I'm completely sucked in! I loved that last little bit told from Leo's point of view, it worked so well as he kind of told the story in a way, guided us through, and he's the perfect person to pull it all together :) Poor Harry :( How he's going to live without Nikki I don't know, but that ending was just so perfect that I wouldn't have wanted it any other way :) Congratulations on a fantastic piece of work, hope to read more from you very soon (even if you choose to kill Harry next time, I'll still read it! Love your fics :)
Love Flossie xxx
10/16/2011 c53 24dinabar
Thank you so much, it was beautiful, and such a calm and dignified ending. I've really enjoyed this story all the way, back at the beginning when we all thought you'd never really kill her off, to our growing realisation in the middle, that no miracle really was to be found, and now to this stately but tragic end. Thanks for keeping going with it, and I'm so glad there will be something more soon. :)
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24dinabarThank you so much, it was beautiful, and such a calm and dignified ending. I've really enjoyed this story all the way, back at the beginning when we all thought you'd never really kill her off, to our growing realisation in the middle, that no miracle really was to be found, and now to this stately but tragic end. Thanks for keeping going with it, and I'm so glad there will be something more soon. :)
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10/16/2011 c53 4Starr123
You've finished it! congratulations on a really captivating fic! I've been reading every update but haven't got around to reviewing them all so this is kinda a whole story review :)
I read this twice before I clicked review and the first time I got really angry that Nikki had gone, but the second time around I didn't and - I don't know, I must be mad - but it felt sort of a right ending to it all with her passing on and leaving Leo and Harry to cope afterwards. :)
So anyway, I've loved this! You're a talented writer,
Love Freya xxx
4Starr123You've finished it! congratulations on a really captivating fic! I've been reading every update but haven't got around to reviewing them all so this is kinda a whole story review :)
I read this twice before I clicked review and the first time I got really angry that Nikki had gone, but the second time around I didn't and - I don't know, I must be mad - but it felt sort of a right ending to it all with her passing on and leaving Leo and Harry to cope afterwards. :)
So anyway, I've loved this! You're a talented writer,
Love Freya xxx
10/16/2011 c53 10tigpop
Yeah, of course I couldn't not read it. I think I became well and truely addicted to this ages ago!
The ending was perfect. Well, not that Nikki had gone, but finishing it with Leo, who kinda introduced the beginning. Does that make sense? Probably not, but just feels like it's gone in a circle. Like Leo was the narrator keeping them all together :p
And the last chapter was so heartbreaking :'( LOVED the story so so much. And it was so true.
'never attempt to replace the special place she was held in his heart.' :'(
Sorry, think I could actually just copy/paste the whole chapter as a favourite bit :p
I can't believe this is over! Thank you so much for the emotional rollercoaster, and the last line is so true. I think I might just feel the same way every time I think of this fic :p haha.
Can't wait for whatever you write in next :D think I might need to go and read this again, and try not to cry so much... Nah, never going to happen, I'll probably cry more knowing what's coming :p
Thanks for an amazing fic :)
xXx
10tigpopYeah, of course I couldn't not read it. I think I became well and truely addicted to this ages ago!
The ending was perfect. Well, not that Nikki had gone, but finishing it with Leo, who kinda introduced the beginning. Does that make sense? Probably not, but just feels like it's gone in a circle. Like Leo was the narrator keeping them all together :p
And the last chapter was so heartbreaking :'( LOVED the story so so much. And it was so true.
'never attempt to replace the special place she was held in his heart.' :'(
Sorry, think I could actually just copy/paste the whole chapter as a favourite bit :p
I can't believe this is over! Thank you so much for the emotional rollercoaster, and the last line is so true. I think I might just feel the same way every time I think of this fic :p haha.
Can't wait for whatever you write in next :D think I might need to go and read this again, and try not to cry so much... Nah, never going to happen, I'll probably cry more knowing what's coming :p
Thanks for an amazing fic :)
xXx
10/16/2011 c52 tigpop
O. M. G!
Tissue warning? BOX of tissues warning :'(
Oh Harry, he needs a hug. He needs Nikki back. He needs for everything to be back to normal! :(
'Harry couldn't help the apprehension spreading through him, rapidly pulling along doubt and fear for the ride' - your writing is amazing, and can almost feel everything they are :(
And then the last line! I think that was enough to destroy any composure I had haha. Emotional mess, again!
I don't want to read the next chapter now. It can't be the end! The end of your fic and of Harry/Nikki :(
xXx
O. M. G!
Tissue warning? BOX of tissues warning :'(
Oh Harry, he needs a hug. He needs Nikki back. He needs for everything to be back to normal! :(
'Harry couldn't help the apprehension spreading through him, rapidly pulling along doubt and fear for the ride' - your writing is amazing, and can almost feel everything they are :(
And then the last line! I think that was enough to destroy any composure I had haha. Emotional mess, again!
I don't want to read the next chapter now. It can't be the end! The end of your fic and of Harry/Nikki :(
xXx
10/16/2011 c53 Lizziginne
Just a little note from me to say how much I've loved this story and how much it has touch me. You wrote it so well that the emotions flowed from the page (screen) and right in to my heart :) excellent story xxx
Just a little note from me to say how much I've loved this story and how much it has touch me. You wrote it so well that the emotions flowed from the page (screen) and right in to my heart :) excellent story xxx
10/16/2011 c53 Izzy
Thanks for the warning on tissues. As hard as it was, I think you wrote beautifully and should be proud of this piece, the ending was perfect.
I look forward to more fanfics.
Izzy xxxxx
Thanks for the warning on tissues. As hard as it was, I think you wrote beautifully and should be proud of this piece, the ending was perfect.
I look forward to more fanfics.
Izzy xxxxx
10/16/2011 c53 EmmaJ1996
Crying. Sob. This was so beautifully done. Well done.
Thanks for writing x
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Crying. Sob. This was so beautifully done. Well done.
Thanks for writing x
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