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5/24/2011 c5 11LivininCorsets
In case u didn't know the flight from DC to Montana (helena) is about seven hours (I live in dc-well reigen int and dullus int are the closest airports to me and I live in ft belvoir va so the dc area- and I had never got a streight flight, my family and I tend to get the flights with the layovers in utah which makes it 8) its so pritty and I wanna go back soon...and Helena is so small the street lights still blink after 10 pm. You need work on spelling and your grammar, I know people arnt perfect (I sure ain't) but I'm seeing consistant mistakes that a beta can easily fix. Hope to read more soon
5/23/2011 c5 4darkplayer35
Very interesting take on the story. I look forward to seeing how it develops from here. Please update soon.
5/21/2011 c5 Chi Vayne
Very sweet chapter.
5/21/2011 c5 ILoveGeorgeEads
i loved it.i can't wait for more.
5/20/2011 c5 1GinaStar
So cute!
5/20/2011 c5 1Bobboky
good
5/20/2011 c5 18Snarky Granger
Aw...what a sweet story so far. I love how Buffy is so taken with him. :D
5/1/2011 c4 jgood27
Love this story and can't wait to read more
4/26/2011 c4 2reader1writer1
Good chapter. Interesting town you've built
4/24/2011 c4 ILoveGeorgeEads
i loved it.i can't wait for more.i can't wait to see Dumbles reaction when he meets Buffy.
4/23/2011 c4 krynny
yeah this is so good it is totally cool. thanks for writing such a wonderful fic.

hugs and kisses

krynny
4/23/2011 c4 5Taboo22
interested in reading more
4/19/2011 c3 2reader1writer1
I love the story so far-not so much Montana, but I'm sure I'll enjoy it as it goes along.
4/19/2011 c3 faneka
I'm looking forward to the next update. Dumbles and DE's had best be careful, you don't want to upset The Slayer, Red Witch, White Knight, Faith or Ripper. It could be hazardous to your health.
4/18/2011 c3 jgood27
Love this story and can't wait to read more
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