for Dusk to Night9/7/2016 c1 Tara
Kyaaaaaaaaa! Amo el ¡R27!
Kyaaaaaaaaa! Amo el ¡R27!
4/22/2015 c1 
18NorCal.NEH
hmm i would say that sense you made it look like reborn was possessive of hi you should make a second chapter and go deeper in to how their relation ship go's beyond them having sex and reborn being possessive. dont worry i have read worse fanficts this was pretty good.
18NorCal.NEHhmm i would say that sense you made it look like reborn was possessive of hi you should make a second chapter and go deeper in to how their relation ship go's beyond them having sex and reborn being possessive. dont worry i have read worse fanficts this was pretty good.
4/3/2014 c1 1Arcana Elixir
no, it's okay!...
[WARNING READ WITH CAUTION...TRY NOT TO CRY]
but, try to improve read other peeps smut scenes and try to redo it. let your emotions flow...man, even I suck writing smut scenes we ain't alone.
AkuShi
1Arcana Elixirno, it's okay!...
[WARNING READ WITH CAUTION...TRY NOT TO CRY]
but, try to improve read other peeps smut scenes and try to redo it. let your emotions flow...man, even I suck writing smut scenes we ain't alone.
AkuShi
12/5/2013 c1 25DarkIceAngelFlare
I think for this fic, it would be really cool if the sequel involved them coming out about their relationship or (being seasonal) Tsuna taking Reborn home to meet his parent(s) for Christmas, only for the nice dinner to be gate crashed by his friends who end up bringing out Reborn's possessive side. Something like that would be cool, I think O_o
25DarkIceAngelFlareI think for this fic, it would be really cool if the sequel involved them coming out about their relationship or (being seasonal) Tsuna taking Reborn home to meet his parent(s) for Christmas, only for the nice dinner to be gate crashed by his friends who end up bringing out Reborn's possessive side. Something like that would be cool, I think O_o
2/25/2013 c1 3charm13insomnia
well poor Tsuna was a virgin and i just don't see how he would be able to accommodate Reborn without some preparation/lubrication
3charm13insomniawell poor Tsuna was a virgin and i just don't see how he would be able to accommodate Reborn without some preparation/lubrication
6/28/2012 c1 Guest
O\\\O soo good
O\\\O soo good
3/28/2012 c1 Jyudaime111
You did awesome! I really loved the way Reborn and Tsuna met in this fanfic. Also, I think Tsuna makes a really cute bean-delivery boy! XD
You did awesome! I really loved the way Reborn and Tsuna met in this fanfic. Also, I think Tsuna makes a really cute bean-delivery boy! XD
11/15/2011 c1 SilverFox
Will you lease make a sequel? this story was so good *eyes sparkle*
Will you lease make a sequel? this story was so good *eyes sparkle*
9/14/2011 c1 Shadow Kitsune67
Heh. Tsuna is sooo adorable. (: Nice oneshot. ;) R27 needs more love n_n
Heh. Tsuna is sooo adorable. (: Nice oneshot. ;) R27 needs more love n_n