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7/5/2015 c1 tasheika.conley
OMG
7/5/2015 c1 39PolHop
This one one of my favorite stories.
12/21/2014 c1 2arses21
My heart aches for these two! I hope for so much more for them.
12/13/2012 c1 16iluvtorun
Wow, this was excellent!
2/24/2012 c1 jevans47403
Oh boy when she wakes up all hell is going to break loose. turn around and go back to her, don't make her one of your one night stands Derek. There needs to be a sequel to this about Pen's point of view. can't believe i didn't review this after i read it the first time, lol. Great job
4/1/2011 c1 66LoveforPenandDerek
that was incrediably beautiful. you did an amazing job with this one shot
3/31/2011 c1 5BettyTheGreat
TURN AROUND AND GO BACK.
3/31/2011 c1 35celticstarwolf
you stupid stupid man turn that ass around and go back to her right now mister or else. beautiful amazingly sad, yet steamy and just perfect hon loved reading it thanks for sharing
3/22/2011 c1 28sangreal7
This was an amazing piece of writing! The ending was heartbreaking to read, because it made me sad to see them so apart. Still, it was so beautifully written that I couldn't help but enjoy every word.
3/22/2011 c1 2Carfa
wow! So powerful. I want to know what happens after. Please update soon!
3/21/2011 c1 10X-MJ-X
Hey,

Just me again, I only just picked up your message - had to go to uni this afternoon :S

Anyway would you believe I read this really early this morning and intended on leaving you a review later anyway? Seriously you don't need to prompt me to hunt out your amazingness - I'm always on the look out for more.

So anyway, to this story...

I must remind you that me living in the UK means that technically I am living in the unspoiled pre 'Lauren' universe where everything is just fine and dandy... Fortunately for me though I can be very persuasive and managed to coerce 'PandameetsSquirrel' into telling me what happens after she mentioned something in her author's note that made me panic. The point of this ramble is to let you know that I am on your way length and know where this story comes from.

In light of this I will now proceed to actually review you stroy (which is kind of the point of this button after all)

I know this was inspired by a dark event and contains pretty immense emotions but I absolutely adored the sadness and rawness of emotion. It was perfect Morgan / Garcia and I never thought that a piece of Penelope and Derek loving could be beautiful without an I love you - you know what it means to me - but I must say this totally changed my mind. I hope there are going to be some more wonderful pieces like this. I'll leave you with that thought and go check out chapter 13 of your other fic - exciting stuff!

Lots of love

Michelle xxxx
3/20/2011 c1 72PinkAngel17
Wow. Poor Penelope. That was beautiful, emotional, heartbreaking, and...did I mention heartbreakingly sad. So very well written though!
3/20/2011 c1 1alohareader
He left her. shame on him!
3/20/2011 c1 10anything-new
Oh, this is so bittersweet, so sad :( I really hope they'll be able to mend their broken hearts.
3/20/2011 c1 56Leigh59
A beautifully written piece so full of emotion. you can feel the pain that they both are feeling.
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