for Shades of Gray9/19/2011 c4 
5TheQueenOfPickles
Awww i think i almost cried. I was all giddy until i remembered about alexa. Now i feel bad for her. :( oh well! I still got more to read!
5TheQueenOfPicklesAwww i think i almost cried. I was all giddy until i remembered about alexa. Now i feel bad for her. :( oh well! I still got more to read!
9/19/2011 c3 TheQueenOfPickles
Epic. One word. Awww crap now its more words... Oh well i already ruined it. I am seriously jelous of your ability with battle scenes and big words. And to think my classmates thought I knew big words... Whatever. But this is epic. See ya next chappie
Epic. One word. Awww crap now its more words... Oh well i already ruined it. I am seriously jelous of your ability with battle scenes and big words. And to think my classmates thought I knew big words... Whatever. But this is epic. See ya next chappie
9/19/2011 c2 TheQueenOfPickles
Ooooh new ocs... Sweet. I like it :) now i think ill go read about who they are!
Ooooh new ocs... Sweet. I like it :) now i think ill go read about who they are!
9/18/2011 c1 TheQueenOfPickles
Ok, i only read the first chapter and i had to review. U knw what? Im gunna review every chapter of this and u wanna knw why? Cause u deserve WAY more than sixteen reviews. :) have an awesome day!
Ok, i only read the first chapter and i had to review. U knw what? Im gunna review every chapter of this and u wanna knw why? Cause u deserve WAY more than sixteen reviews. :) have an awesome day!
9/9/2011 c10 4Same Coin
So I totally agree with the other reviews, except the one about God of War don't know what that is, but then again I am still such a newb *sigh* I guess it just goes to prove a piont. But yeah, your story is so much better than mine.
4Same CoinSo I totally agree with the other reviews, except the one about God of War don't know what that is, but then again I am still such a newb *sigh* I guess it just goes to prove a piont. But yeah, your story is so much better than mine.
8/30/2011 c1 Kai-Chan94
I'm really liking the story so far. You have a very nice way with words. And believe me I am happy that I found a story with Soul Eater OC's that doesn't make me cringe away in revulsion as well. Have a nice week.
Kai
I'm really liking the story so far. You have a very nice way with words. And believe me I am happy that I found a story with Soul Eater OC's that doesn't make me cringe away in revulsion as well. Have a nice week.
Kai
8/26/2011 c10 Hadouken
Another sweet chapter. DEADE is a really interesting villain, and Roland's resonance technique is cool. When you say its a cestus, I imagine the Nemean Cestus from God of War 3, except a wolf head instead of a lion's. Plus of course, the retractable sword. At least that's the image I get, but whatever.
Isabelle and Jackson's kiss was cute. Yay romance!
Another sweet chapter. DEADE is a really interesting villain, and Roland's resonance technique is cool. When you say its a cestus, I imagine the Nemean Cestus from God of War 3, except a wolf head instead of a lion's. Plus of course, the retractable sword. At least that's the image I get, but whatever.
Isabelle and Jackson's kiss was cute. Yay romance!
8/25/2011 c2 HotStepper
Wow! This fic is awesome!
Okay, that sounded like a sugar hyped thirteen year old. Which I am not, I swear!
All right, some things that I like before I read any further or get distracted by my hamster. I'm doing two chapters in one review here, so bear with me.
I like how you introduce Roland. The whole medical file thing with Medusa still being the school nurse was clever.
I also liked how Roland and Alexa met. I think the witch being in Death City was a little random, but whatever. The fight was still cool and realistic, mostly because you made it obvious that they were gonna get their asses kicked if Maka and Stein and Sid hadn't shown up.
The way you did the introductions for Isabelle and Kyla and their weapons in the second chapter reminded me of the beginning of the manga, when they do the intros for the main trio.
I can't wait to see where this story goes! Hurray!
Wow! This fic is awesome!
Okay, that sounded like a sugar hyped thirteen year old. Which I am not, I swear!
All right, some things that I like before I read any further or get distracted by my hamster. I'm doing two chapters in one review here, so bear with me.
I like how you introduce Roland. The whole medical file thing with Medusa still being the school nurse was clever.
I also liked how Roland and Alexa met. I think the witch being in Death City was a little random, but whatever. The fight was still cool and realistic, mostly because you made it obvious that they were gonna get their asses kicked if Maka and Stein and Sid hadn't shown up.
The way you did the introductions for Isabelle and Kyla and their weapons in the second chapter reminded me of the beginning of the manga, when they do the intros for the main trio.
I can't wait to see where this story goes! Hurray!
8/16/2011 c9 MadMax210
very interesting chapter that leads into the action and suspense of the next chapter. Can't wait to see the rest of the correlation between Roland and Madeline
very interesting chapter that leads into the action and suspense of the next chapter. Can't wait to see the rest of the correlation between Roland and Madeline
6/30/2011 c8 MadMax210
Again, I feel I must say "So much for solving the source of soul rejection." A bit too late for that now I guess. Very well done with the fighting scenes, they seem to be difficult to write, but you seemed to pull it off here.
No reason to apologize for slow postings, the obligations of real life take priority over everything else. Good chapter, I look forward to the next one.
Again, I feel I must say "So much for solving the source of soul rejection." A bit too late for that now I guess. Very well done with the fighting scenes, they seem to be difficult to write, but you seemed to pull it off here.
No reason to apologize for slow postings, the obligations of real life take priority over everything else. Good chapter, I look forward to the next one.
6/4/2011 c5 MadMax210
This is truly, SO much better than an OC story I've read. It's a shame no one really gives this a chance, it's so much better than all the crappy maka/soul stories filling up the place. This has so much depth to it,I'm anxious to find out what happens next.
This is truly, SO much better than an OC story I've read. It's a shame no one really gives this a chance, it's so much better than all the crappy maka/soul stories filling up the place. This has so much depth to it,I'm anxious to find out what happens next.
6/4/2011 c4 MadMax210
Aww, the emotion in this chapter is cute and touching. I've seen the name Raenas once before. Argeri?
Aww, the emotion in this chapter is cute and touching. I've seen the name Raenas once before. Argeri?
6/4/2011 c2 MadMax210
Very well written, it's a shame you have to be placed in the same category as the other OCs stories. It is SO much better than the rest.
Very well written, it's a shame you have to be placed in the same category as the other OCs stories. It is SO much better than the rest.