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for All these wasted years

6/3/2017 c1 1Serenityin2
Damn that hit you in the gut well written I can see it happening in my mind. if the show could have continued that could have happened.
5/19/2011 c1 9sxevlbtch
I have to say this was one of the more realistic and heart breaking angst pieces I have read with these two in awhile. Very realistic that Jayne would use his last breath to kiss her like that. Major kudos. I have to say I would love to see what you would do with the opposite, if River was dying I mean.
3/31/2011 c1 203Gotham Siren
Such a little story, so much emotion.

I enjoyed this, it brought tears to my eyes, but it was very good.

Good work.

*TCandBTVSluver*
3/26/2011 c1 kurtainkid
is it possible for something to be kinda cute and at the same time terribly upsetting, or am i just crazy? anyway, i liked it.
3/25/2011 c1 Dherea
I think my heart just broke for them. The raw emotions were so powerful. This is beautiful and tragic.
3/24/2011 c1 The Frisky Firelily
Oh this was so heartbreaking! A decade of emotion thrown into his last kiss, so poignant and beautiful. Well done.

Also, in reference to your authors note: I wish you owned Firefly.
3/23/2011 c1 jenefaner
omg! *tears*! Bad you! bad bad bad...*sniff...

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