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4/19/2011 c1 6St. Iggy the Pyro
a bit of friendly fellow-author advice, you should punctuate and paragraph it, that makes it a million times easier to read. Other then that, I likethe story line to it. Please post more
3/31/2011 c2 3Astriel Storm
Good story, but it desperately needs punctuation. Also I found it hard to read because it was not paragraphed.
3/25/2011 c1 xxmudtailxx
I liked the idea of your story, but it had no punctuation, and I had trouble feeling for the characters. The other thing I had a problem with is that your story had no flow what soever.
3/24/2011 c1 Ky
AMAZING! I loved it. Please update soon!

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