for The Confession One Shot Entry Week 13 Contest3/26/2011 c1 ABANDONED4EVA
I cried. I loved it. A Sookie that lets go of stubborn. Awesome. I am stubborn and I know how hard it can be to stop being stubborn, and you captured that perfectly. :)
I cried. I loved it. A Sookie that lets go of stubborn. Awesome. I am stubborn and I know how hard it can be to stop being stubborn, and you captured that perfectly. :)
3/26/2011 c1 ebm1
Wonderful alternative! Loved the comment about Pam's smirk. Thanks for sharing the story, it was great.
Wonderful alternative! Loved the comment about Pam's smirk. Thanks for sharing the story, it was great.
3/26/2011 c1 gnrclln
Perfection as always! Your version of events are so much better than the books. Of course I prefer your "Remember" universe but this is great too.
Perfection as always! Your version of events are so much better than the books. Of course I prefer your "Remember" universe but this is great too.
3/26/2011 c1 Siberian shewolf
"Pam, when Eric first made you did he pull you aside and teach you to smirk like him or is it like that weird thing where dogs become more like their masters over long periods of time?" OMG LOL:)
I really enjoyed that story, it was beautifully written as are all your stories:)
Thanks for sharing:)
Hugs xxx
"Pam, when Eric first made you did he pull you aside and teach you to smirk like him or is it like that weird thing where dogs become more like their masters over long periods of time?" OMG LOL:)
I really enjoyed that story, it was beautifully written as are all your stories:)
Thanks for sharing:)
Hugs xxx
3/25/2011 c1 
2Beertjes
i loved it.. are you going to continue on with it after the contest is finished.. if so i cant wait to see what happens next..
2Beertjesi loved it.. are you going to continue on with it after the contest is finished.. if so i cant wait to see what happens next..
3/25/2011 c1 VAlady
Very nice, much better than what happened between them in the book. And Pam is perfect.
Very nice, much better than what happened between them in the book. And Pam is perfect.
3/25/2011 c1 4Tynee23
I liked this scenario compared to the actual story in the book. But I like them together and would have liked them to have been together sooner. Thanks
4Tynee23I liked this scenario compared to the actual story in the book. But I like them together and would have liked them to have been together sooner. Thanks
3/25/2011 c1 4svmfan1
Great job. I always enjoy "what if" stories and oh how I wish this is how it played out. Although part of me was worried about where the heck Pam was while all that was going on. In the book Pam's bed was in the same room so good thing it was an adjoining room. (not that Eric would have cared, lol) Thanks for sharing.
4svmfan1Great job. I always enjoy "what if" stories and oh how I wish this is how it played out. Although part of me was worried about where the heck Pam was while all that was going on. In the book Pam's bed was in the same room so good thing it was an adjoining room. (not that Eric would have cared, lol) Thanks for sharing.
3/24/2011 c1 70Suki59
Thank you, tracee! Was it good for you too? *lights a cigarette* Where were we? Oh yes, the challenge! So, yes, you definitely met the challenge here. I thank you for your lovely lemony story! Bravo, my sweet!
70Suki59Thank you, tracee! Was it good for you too? *lights a cigarette* Where were we? Oh yes, the challenge! So, yes, you definitely met the challenge here. I thank you for your lovely lemony story! Bravo, my sweet!
3/24/2011 c1 3Waiting on Summer
A really nice 'what if' and a great interpretation of the one-shot theme! Well done.
3Waiting on SummerA really nice 'what if' and a great interpretation of the one-shot theme! Well done.
3/24/2011 c1 Chipndalegal
That was a wonderful "what if" Mama Minion! I think Rhodes is the perfect place for them to "rediscover" each other. Such a huge step with the bonding and Charlaine just has her leave with Quinn. I like your version so much better!
That was a wonderful "what if" Mama Minion! I think Rhodes is the perfect place for them to "rediscover" each other. Such a huge step with the bonding and Charlaine just has her leave with Quinn. I like your version so much better!
3/24/2011 c1 charhamblin
Well, Cheese and Rice!, that was hot! Love the new take on Book 5/6, so glad we have something else other than lost memories (book 4)on fanfic now. Over and over, it's all the same now that TB is coming out with S4. Hope you keep up with this. Awesome writing, great beta skills. Flows like a dream and from that sex scene, I'll be dreaming me a big huge Viking tonight. Kudos to you. Love for you to continue and see how you would dream of the bombing, Sophie Anne, Bill, etc.
Well, Cheese and Rice!, that was hot! Love the new take on Book 5/6, so glad we have something else other than lost memories (book 4)on fanfic now. Over and over, it's all the same now that TB is coming out with S4. Hope you keep up with this. Awesome writing, great beta skills. Flows like a dream and from that sex scene, I'll be dreaming me a big huge Viking tonight. Kudos to you. Love for you to continue and see how you would dream of the bombing, Sophie Anne, Bill, etc.