
2/11/2015 c1 delete-account-please-6358491
glad to have located this story. It really was remarkable.
glad to have located this story. It really was remarkable.
2/10/2015 c1 delete-account-please-6354030
i’m so glad to have picked this story. It really was fantastic.
i’m so glad to have picked this story. It really was fantastic.
7/4/2014 c1
27mitkit99
Please post another chapter. Sue should really get arrested for all this crap!

Please post another chapter. Sue should really get arrested for all this crap!
5/14/2012 c1
4Encuentrame
Loved it. I do wish it was multi-chapter though. Either way great one-shot.

Loved it. I do wish it was multi-chapter though. Either way great one-shot.
12/20/2011 c1
10bouquineuse
Really enjoyed everything about this story! You totally nailed the characters. I especially loved your Sue and Jesse banter, and I found myself grinning all the way through the dialogue.
I admit I was wondering how you'd get Jesse to convince Rachel to see him, and I think you managed that convincingly. And the Jesse Rachel scenes? Phew! Tantalizingly hot. St. Berry are so combustible together. Why oh why can't the writers see that?

Really enjoyed everything about this story! You totally nailed the characters. I especially loved your Sue and Jesse banter, and I found myself grinning all the way through the dialogue.
I admit I was wondering how you'd get Jesse to convince Rachel to see him, and I think you managed that convincingly. And the Jesse Rachel scenes? Phew! Tantalizingly hot. St. Berry are so combustible together. Why oh why can't the writers see that?
10/30/2011 c1
1redmangobliss95
That was brilliant, amazing, beautiful, awesome, EXQUISITE! Okay, I'm speechless. This should be the best St. Berry fic ever! Every single moment of the two of them together was just perfectly planned, realistic, witty, and at the same time romantic. I have no more to say only that I look forward to more oneshots. :)

That was brilliant, amazing, beautiful, awesome, EXQUISITE! Okay, I'm speechless. This should be the best St. Berry fic ever! Every single moment of the two of them together was just perfectly planned, realistic, witty, and at the same time romantic. I have no more to say only that I look forward to more oneshots. :)
10/15/2011 c1 Alex Hess
Hi There! I honestly do not know why I had not left a review here, I mean, I read this story so many times, is my favorite and you're my favorite writer in this fandom... God it just was perfect as everything you write, I can't decide where to start commenting about it, I loved the character of Jesse, I love the Rachel's reaction to his return, the fact that Jesse wants her back, he'll always want her. Thanks for give me the pleasure to read.
Hi There! I honestly do not know why I had not left a review here, I mean, I read this story so many times, is my favorite and you're my favorite writer in this fandom... God it just was perfect as everything you write, I can't decide where to start commenting about it, I loved the character of Jesse, I love the Rachel's reaction to his return, the fact that Jesse wants her back, he'll always want her. Thanks for give me the pleasure to read.