
8/28/2024 c68 Sonia Hdz Q
Wow! I just didn't want to finish this story. Great great simply great. Thanks for sharing this.
Wow! I just didn't want to finish this story. Great great simply great. Thanks for sharing this.
8/27/2024 c40
1Julie Spencer
I am not sure if you are still around reading reviews since you wrote this quite a few years ago, but I wanted to leave one in case you were.
The plot of your story is awesome! I am enjoying it a lot...The punctuation, or rather the lack of punctuation, not so much. It makes the story very difficult to read, but since I am hooked on the plot and want to find out what happens I am trudging along to get to the end though it is very frustrating.
A word of advice if you post another story...Get someone to read through it before posting...Or give it a quick read yourself at the very least. It will make it a lot easier to get through and I think more readers will make it all the way to the end instead of giving up after the first few chapters.

I am not sure if you are still around reading reviews since you wrote this quite a few years ago, but I wanted to leave one in case you were.
The plot of your story is awesome! I am enjoying it a lot...The punctuation, or rather the lack of punctuation, not so much. It makes the story very difficult to read, but since I am hooked on the plot and want to find out what happens I am trudging along to get to the end though it is very frustrating.
A word of advice if you post another story...Get someone to read through it before posting...Or give it a quick read yourself at the very least. It will make it a lot easier to get through and I think more readers will make it all the way to the end instead of giving up after the first few chapters.
5/9/2024 c54 Fuzz79
Excellent chapter. Loved hearing Matt’s inner sialogue about Steph’s test. Thank yoh
Excellent chapter. Loved hearing Matt’s inner sialogue about Steph’s test. Thank yoh
5/7/2024 c47 Fuzz79
I w stoped to review. I am rereading this story. I have read hundreds of fanfic stories. This is by far one of the best. So much detail, angst, humor, love. So many little stories inside of this wonderful story. Thank you so much for all the work you put in to bringing us an amazing read.
I w stoped to review. I am rereading this story. I have read hundreds of fanfic stories. This is by far one of the best. So much detail, angst, humor, love. So many little stories inside of this wonderful story. Thank you so much for all the work you put in to bringing us an amazing read.
10/30/2023 c68 Guest
What's with the white cunt Stephanie sitting on all the Rangeman manwhores laps. She can become their whore mascot
What's with the white cunt Stephanie sitting on all the Rangeman manwhores laps. She can become their whore mascot
6/2/2023 c32 Guest
When Doug said a woman needs to do what a man says I actually saw stars. No man alive is going to tell me what I can or can't do. I'm like Stephanie 1st and I will make my decision. In the 25 years my husband and I were married before he died he never once tried to tell me what I could or couldn't do
When Doug said a woman needs to do what a man says I actually saw stars. No man alive is going to tell me what I can or can't do. I'm like Stephanie 1st and I will make my decision. In the 25 years my husband and I were married before he died he never once tried to tell me what I could or couldn't do
5/27/2023 c13 Midoric
While I really like your story, I am sorry to say I hate you repeating yourself from each persons POV. I get lost thinking I am rereading something that I just read and that I am not in the right place in the chapter.
While I really like your story, I am sorry to say I hate you repeating yourself from each persons POV. I get lost thinking I am rereading something that I just read and that I am not in the right place in the chapter.
5/10/2023 c68 crzy4luke
Thank you for an amazing story. But please please please write the sequel soon! This story can’t just end here. I’m anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Thank you for an amazing story. But please please please write the sequel soon! This story can’t just end here. I’m anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
2/19/2023 c53 Diane Williams
Exciting! Loved this chapter!
Exciting! Loved this chapter!
11/23/2022 c68 Guest
Slut Stephanie are her man craziness
Slut Stephanie are her man craziness