for What Does it Mean to Trust11/9/2022 c68 Guest
What's with all the Rangeman employees getting emotional and obsessing over the easy slut Stephanie! Even the bitch Ram throwing a stapler! Are these really ex Army men or Chippendales
What's with all the Rangeman employees getting emotional and obsessing over the easy slut Stephanie! Even the bitch Ram throwing a stapler! Are these really ex Army men or Chippendales
11/7/2022 c68 Dixie Powell
Loved the story, hated the ending but with the promise of a sequel I am hopeful. No hanging here just a great job of writing a story with every emotion included. Thank you!
Loved the story, hated the ending but with the promise of a sequel I am hopeful. No hanging here just a great job of writing a story with every emotion included. Thank you!
10/17/2022 c68 Guest
I want to start by saying I really enjoyed your story. I do have some constructive criticism. I don't mean this to be mean or rude or to hurt your feelings, but there were times when your story was very difficult to read due to the lack of punctuation which made the sentences very long and hard to read and understand. There were times I had to reread a sentence a couple of times to get what you were trying to say. There were other times that had me questioning whether or not you proofread it at all. Like I said. This is not meant to be mean. I really enjoyed the story. It is just the punctuation errors made it difficult to read at times.
I want to start by saying I really enjoyed your story. I do have some constructive criticism. I don't mean this to be mean or rude or to hurt your feelings, but there were times when your story was very difficult to read due to the lack of punctuation which made the sentences very long and hard to read and understand. There were times I had to reread a sentence a couple of times to get what you were trying to say. There were other times that had me questioning whether or not you proofread it at all. Like I said. This is not meant to be mean. I really enjoyed the story. It is just the punctuation errors made it difficult to read at times.
10/9/2022 c49 Guest
This may sound awful but I loved seeing Rangeman give Doug what he had coming
This may sound awful but I loved seeing Rangeman give Doug what he had coming
10/8/2022 c38 Guest
This chapter made me laugh. I'm really enjoying it. Can't wait to see momma Plum and Morelli get what they have coming to them
This chapter made me laugh. I'm really enjoying it. Can't wait to see momma Plum and Morelli get what they have coming to them
10/7/2022 c3 Guest
I remember why I didn't read this much further than this.
POV stories are hard pressed to advance a story. Thus the 68, or so, chapters. Nobody cares what the pov of the guy on the sidewalk is, let alone every minor character in the series. You put the reader on a hamster wheel and the story doesn't seem to go anywhere.
I remember why I didn't read this much further than this.
POV stories are hard pressed to advance a story. Thus the 68, or so, chapters. Nobody cares what the pov of the guy on the sidewalk is, let alone every minor character in the series. You put the reader on a hamster wheel and the story doesn't seem to go anywhere.
7/21/2022 c44 Guest
I'm not from Louisiana but I am born and raised in Mississippi and I know all about the Swamp Zero talked about as I spent most of my growing up summers in Louisiana with my uncle. His story brought back good memories. When Doug going to die
I'm not from Louisiana but I am born and raised in Mississippi and I know all about the Swamp Zero talked about as I spent most of my growing up summers in Louisiana with my uncle. His story brought back good memories. When Doug going to die
7/20/2022 c28 Guest
Holy crap. This is so good
Holy crap. This is so good
7/20/2022 c39 Guest
When is that Doug going to get what he has coming to him
When is that Doug going to get what he has coming to him
7/19/2022 c32 Guest
I can't wait to see Joe, momma Plum and Doug get what they have coming to them
I can't wait to see Joe, momma Plum and Doug get what they have coming to them
5/1/2022 c68 JeanieJ
A great story! Thank you for sharing with us! Thank you also for the sequel and hanging out with this ending!
A great story! Thank you for sharing with us! Thank you also for the sequel and hanging out with this ending!
9/20/2021 c30 houses to rent
I'm really struggling to read this turgid load of baloney, so I'll decided that, regretfully, I'm going to have to bin it and find something that doesn't set my teeth on edge so much.
I would normally just skip past stories that I feel are not written well enough for my tastes, but this is such a badly-written, ungrammatical, misspelt, badly-punctuated repetitive piece that I cannot ignore it. If you are to continue writing, I would urge you to either have someone edit and proof-read your stories before you post them, or alternatively use one of the readily available grammar-correction programmes that are readily available.
I'm really struggling to read this turgid load of baloney, so I'll decided that, regretfully, I'm going to have to bin it and find something that doesn't set my teeth on edge so much.
I would normally just skip past stories that I feel are not written well enough for my tastes, but this is such a badly-written, ungrammatical, misspelt, badly-punctuated repetitive piece that I cannot ignore it. If you are to continue writing, I would urge you to either have someone edit and proof-read your stories before you post them, or alternatively use one of the readily available grammar-correction programmes that are readily available.
9/18/2021 c5 Guest
What a pathetic, whinging, weak-willed cry baby this version of Stephanie is. She is so irritating she deserves to be married to Joe Morelli and cheated on for the rest of her life. She's an insult to all women everywhere. Your grammar sucks.
What a pathetic, whinging, weak-willed cry baby this version of Stephanie is. She is so irritating she deserves to be married to Joe Morelli and cheated on for the rest of her life. She's an insult to all women everywhere. Your grammar sucks.