for What Does it Mean to Trust9/18/2021 c1 Guest
This is like trying to read your way through treacle. You apparently have absolutely no sense of punctuation, hence reading your story is akin to one long, diatribe without a break. As a tip, you should use a comma/semi colon wherever you would normally take a breath in a sentence. I'm sure the storyline is great, but the meaning and shape of the text is completely ruined by the prr punctuation. I'm sorry I can't give a more positive review, but it is at least honest.
This is like trying to read your way through treacle. You apparently have absolutely no sense of punctuation, hence reading your story is akin to one long, diatribe without a break. As a tip, you should use a comma/semi colon wherever you would normally take a breath in a sentence. I'm sure the storyline is great, but the meaning and shape of the text is completely ruined by the prr punctuation. I'm sorry I can't give a more positive review, but it is at least honest.
6/15/2021 c23 an00626
I'm reading this again, I keep thinking Ranger and Tank would have already either fired them or shipped them off because Stephanie would sense them being killed. And there would be no story without them lol great story.
I'm reading this again, I keep thinking Ranger and Tank would have already either fired them or shipped them off because Stephanie would sense them being killed. And there would be no story without them lol great story.
10/11/2020 c16 
3Mkaylanymphy55
heyyyy so I'm loving the story so far, but the running requirement is very outlandish. no one has run a 3 minute mile yet and also current army ranger requirements for running are 5 miles in 40 minutes or less, not 15 minutes.
3Mkaylanymphy55heyyyy so I'm loving the story so far, but the running requirement is very outlandish. no one has run a 3 minute mile yet and also current army ranger requirements for running are 5 miles in 40 minutes or less, not 15 minutes.
5/22/2019 c16 Guest
You’re a great story teller but I would recommend getting a beta. Your grammar needs a lot of work and there are a lot of things in your story that aren’t realistic. There’s no way Stephanie could go from being sedentary to passing the Rangeman physical exam in two weeks. And running 3 miles in 5 minutes is physically impossible considering the world record for a woman running one mile is over 4 minutes
You’re a great story teller but I would recommend getting a beta. Your grammar needs a lot of work and there are a lot of things in your story that aren’t realistic. There’s no way Stephanie could go from being sedentary to passing the Rangeman physical exam in two weeks. And running 3 miles in 5 minutes is physically impossible considering the world record for a woman running one mile is over 4 minutes
5/22/2019 c16 Guest
You’re a good story teller but I would recommend getting a beta. Your grammar needs a lot of work and there are a lot of things in your story that aren’t realistic. No way Stephanie could go from being sedentary to a Rangeman ready in two week. And running 5 miles in fifteen minutes is physically impossible. The world record for a woman running one mile is over
You’re a good story teller but I would recommend getting a beta. Your grammar needs a lot of work and there are a lot of things in your story that aren’t realistic. No way Stephanie could go from being sedentary to a Rangeman ready in two week. And running 5 miles in fifteen minutes is physically impossible. The world record for a woman running one mile is over
5/22/2019 c14 Guest
Stephanie’s female so it would be Angelita with an A, not O.
Stephanie’s female so it would be Angelita with an A, not O.
2/4/2019 c68 Blistful2006
holy crap what a place to end it. I was so happy Morelli and Helen got theirs in the end. I didnt feel bad at all for her father as he wasnt really one anyway. great story
holy crap what a place to end it. I was so happy Morelli and Helen got theirs in the end. I didnt feel bad at all for her father as he wasnt really one anyway. great story
1/13/2019 c29 Bonnie
Wow. They are lucky no one else caught the bullet that got Cal!
Lol. Tank let Morelli go alright.
How can she question herself and think she is a burden?!
Oh. I just thought of something.
I'm surprised Doug didn't tell the cops the Rangemen were lying in parts.
Nah! He knew he'd be dead and gone in a minute.
Wow. They are lucky no one else caught the bullet that got Cal!
Lol. Tank let Morelli go alright.
How can she question herself and think she is a burden?!
Oh. I just thought of something.
I'm surprised Doug didn't tell the cops the Rangemen were lying in parts.
Nah! He knew he'd be dead and gone in a minute.
1/13/2019 c28 Guest
Ugh! So many f words! Through the whole story.
I'm glad things did not end ugly with Val.
Omg that was disgusting what Doug did and he said he did it to other women too.
She creamed Joyce.
Thank goodness the mm were close enough and strong enough to keep her from Joe!
I'm sure he will be going to a holding cell now!
Ugh! So many f words! Through the whole story.
I'm glad things did not end ugly with Val.
Omg that was disgusting what Doug did and he said he did it to other women too.
She creamed Joyce.
Thank goodness the mm were close enough and strong enough to keep her from Joe!
I'm sure he will be going to a holding cell now!
1/13/2019 c27 Bonnie
Uh oh!
First Doug, now Val. Soon Morelli! They sure know how to spoil the fun.
It's going to get interesting mighty quick!
Uh oh!
First Doug, now Val. Soon Morelli! They sure know how to spoil the fun.
It's going to get interesting mighty quick!
1/13/2019 c26 Bonnie
I loved Val's point of view. I hope she can get out from under Helen's thumb. Too bad she doesn't know about her cheating ways. If Joe ever approached her I hope she laughs in his face!
Girls night out should be very interesting!
I loved Val's point of view. I hope she can get out from under Helen's thumb. Too bad she doesn't know about her cheating ways. If Joe ever approached her I hope she laughs in his face!
Girls night out should be very interesting!
1/13/2019 c25 Bonnie
Loved all the memories the guys had, except Doug, then the episode with Hal.
Then smut! Always good.
Then all the vehicles, and she beat Les!
Fun chapter.
Loved all the memories the guys had, except Doug, then the episode with Hal.
Then smut! Always good.
Then all the vehicles, and she beat Les!
Fun chapter.
1/13/2019 c24 Bonnie
They found the guy delivered the package and are pretty sure it came from Joe.
Lol.
They cleaned up Stark street which would normally take years, if ever.
They found the guy delivered the package and are pretty sure it came from Joe.
Lol.
They cleaned up Stark street which would normally take years, if ever.
1/12/2019 c23 Bonnie
Sick! Sick! Sick!
Morelli has so lost his mind!
I'm surprised Mike doesn't just disappear while he is still alive.
Doug will deserve what he gets.
He is a chauvenist, cry baby like Joe!
Hmm.
Helen has been quiet too.
Sick! Sick! Sick!
Morelli has so lost his mind!
I'm surprised Mike doesn't just disappear while he is still alive.
Doug will deserve what he gets.
He is a chauvenist, cry baby like Joe!
Hmm.
Helen has been quiet too.