for One Stupid Thing8/1/2024 c11 LadySnowdon
oh wow, what a story! I loved this one, will have to use my imagination as to where it went. I love the idea of Edward carrying a torch for Bella since he was 13. Of course the age difference doesn't matter now. I've been reading some of your other fics this week too, they're fantastic! I discovered your writing as it was recommended on a Twilight fanfic Facebook page.
oh wow, what a story! I loved this one, will have to use my imagination as to where it went. I love the idea of Edward carrying a torch for Bella since he was 13. Of course the age difference doesn't matter now. I've been reading some of your other fics this week too, they're fantastic! I discovered your writing as it was recommended on a Twilight fanfic Facebook page.
5/9/2020 c11 
6Pink Bead Girl
This story is so wonderful. Your writing is funny, informative and just has that hook that makes it impossible to stop reading. It finishes on quite the cliffhanger and I really hope that you may finish it one day.
Thank you for the pleasure of your imagination, I really loved it.
6Pink Bead GirlThis story is so wonderful. Your writing is funny, informative and just has that hook that makes it impossible to stop reading. It finishes on quite the cliffhanger and I really hope that you may finish it one day.
Thank you for the pleasure of your imagination, I really loved it.
12/1/2019 c11 Elisabeth123
Cute! Very cute! PLEASE don’t let us have too much Jake action or an engagement but a quick break up and onto the HEA of Bella and Edward! Please
Cute! Very cute! PLEASE don’t let us have too much Jake action or an engagement but a quick break up and onto the HEA of Bella and Edward! Please
10/8/2018 c11 13archy12
Very entertaining. This story really has a lot of potential for funny, sometimes awkward situations! :D
Aha, so Jasper put together all the twos recently. But his suggestion was a good one. Edward should definitely accept Bella's help.
Of course he doesn't know about Jake yet, but things can change, right?
I know sometimes it's difficult to come back to a story, but please consider continuing this one after you complete 'Indelible'. I'm sure lots of readers are waiting to read more of Awkward-ward and Spanish-teacher-ella!
13archy12Very entertaining. This story really has a lot of potential for funny, sometimes awkward situations! :D
Aha, so Jasper put together all the twos recently. But his suggestion was a good one. Edward should definitely accept Bella's help.
Of course he doesn't know about Jake yet, but things can change, right?
I know sometimes it's difficult to come back to a story, but please consider continuing this one after you complete 'Indelible'. I'm sure lots of readers are waiting to read more of Awkward-ward and Spanish-teacher-ella!
10/8/2018 c10 archy12
Hmm, maybe Edward will buy their house one day...when they want to sell it.
Haha, so Bella is his next door neighbour now. That's quite a coincidence. :)
Jasper's life sounds really interesting!
Hmm, maybe Edward will buy their house one day...when they want to sell it.
Haha, so Bella is his next door neighbour now. That's quite a coincidence. :)
Jasper's life sounds really interesting!
10/8/2018 c9 archy12
I bet Bella lives close by, and Jasper knows (by now) about Edward's crush on her. Well, at least he knows that Edward likes Bella in the present.
What a sweet story, yet so realistic!
I bet Bella lives close by, and Jasper knows (by now) about Edward's crush on her. Well, at least he knows that Edward likes Bella in the present.
What a sweet story, yet so realistic!
10/8/2018 c8 archy12
Hmm, so Jake is a busy man. Wonder what will that mean for their relationship in the future.
Thirteen year old Edward certainly had some wild imagination. :D
Emmett might tease Edward a lot, but he had his back where it counted, right?
Hmm, so Jake is a busy man. Wonder what will that mean for their relationship in the future.
Thirteen year old Edward certainly had some wild imagination. :D
Emmett might tease Edward a lot, but he had his back where it counted, right?
10/8/2018 c7 archy12
Yes, Edward did clue Bella a little to his feelings, past and present. I think she finds the idea strange because she has known him for years, otherwise three years is nothing, and Edward is twenty three now.
Yes, Edward did clue Bella a little to his feelings, past and present. I think she finds the idea strange because she has known him for years, otherwise three years is nothing, and Edward is twenty three now.
10/7/2018 c5 archy12
Oh, so Jake is the 'wrong man'!
That was a long crush on Edward's part. But now that he has grown up, he has a chance. :)
Oh, so Jake is the 'wrong man'!
That was a long crush on Edward's part. But now that he has grown up, he has a chance. :)
10/7/2018 c4 archy12
Of course Bella hadn't thought that Edward might have a crush on her. She just wanted him to do well at school!
But now that they are older...
Of course Bella hadn't thought that Edward might have a crush on her. She just wanted him to do well at school!
But now that they are older...
10/7/2018 c3 archy12
A crush in those early teenage years hits so hard...I can sympathize with Edward. And of course Bella was older so he couldn't do anything about it.
A crush in those early teenage years hits so hard...I can sympathize with Edward. And of course Bella was older so he couldn't do anything about it.
9/26/2018 c1 Guest
pleaseeeeeee finish this story! i’m so engrossed in this story and something similar is happening to me in real life as well and i really want to see if edward and bella have a happy ending and if it might apply to me as well :)
pleaseeeeeee finish this story! i’m so engrossed in this story and something similar is happening to me in real life as well and i really want to see if edward and bella have a happy ending and if it might apply to me as well :)