for A Voice in the Darkness11/7/2017 c1 fla.polo
Wow. The saddest thing? It still happens worldwide. Great writing, despite the facts depicted.
Wow. The saddest thing? It still happens worldwide. Great writing, despite the facts depicted.
10/22/2017 c1 Ivy Pattinson
Her choice, ABSOLUTELY!
Thank you for writing this and shining light on a horrible reality! I wish so many times this never happened but sadly every single day a woman, girl, man, or boy is taken into this horrendous life. Just where I live we have a news group that works to update instantly and there's always kids going missing. Breaks my heart because I pray that they're ok, but know that something like this is more than likely happening.
Her choice, ABSOLUTELY!
Thank you for writing this and shining light on a horrible reality! I wish so many times this never happened but sadly every single day a woman, girl, man, or boy is taken into this horrendous life. Just where I live we have a news group that works to update instantly and there's always kids going missing. Breaks my heart because I pray that they're ok, but know that something like this is more than likely happening.
10/22/2017 c1 
15Claire Bloom
You wrote this story with such grace including the abhorrent scenes, and you'd words gave Bella the dignity and voice she was denied.
If it's possible to say so, with regards to such a tragic story, I really did enjoy this tale.
Thank you for sharing x
15Claire BloomYou wrote this story with such grace including the abhorrent scenes, and you'd words gave Bella the dignity and voice she was denied.
If it's possible to say so, with regards to such a tragic story, I really did enjoy this tale.
Thank you for sharing x
2/27/2017 c1 4SarcasticBimbo
Fantastic piece. I would do the same thing in her shoes. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.
4SarcasticBimboFantastic piece. I would do the same thing in her shoes. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.
2/7/2017 c1 TinaF
Wow! It's sad that this really happens in life. Well written. Thank you for sharing.
Wow! It's sad that this really happens in life. Well written. Thank you for sharing.
1/22/2017 c1 el
.god.
I feel sooo bad. I wanna do something. And in your A.N you were right. I wanna help and decrease this number you mentiond.
.god.
I feel sooo bad. I wanna do something. And in your A.N you were right. I wanna help and decrease this number you mentiond.
1/16/2017 c1 life of Grey
The subject is horrible yet needed you have written it beautifully thank you
The subject is horrible yet needed you have written it beautifully thank you
1/6/2017 c1 PlzFangMe
I think you're very brave for tackling such a sad and real topic. Thank you for sharing your gifts with us.
I think you're very brave for tackling such a sad and real topic. Thank you for sharing your gifts with us.
11/15/2016 c1 4Blue Girl98
I absolutely love this story. Not because I like reading this stuff, but because so few have the courage to actually write the truth. You have no idea how many stories I've ran into that depict Bella falling in love with Edward when they come into contact like this, along with different variations. So few get the reality of what slaves (whether it's sex or "servent" type) actually encounter, and what their mental psyche consists of. While it pains me to actually think of the reality of these occurrences, I'm glad to know some people have the gut to post, let alone write, them for the world to see.
~Cynthia
4Blue Girl98I absolutely love this story. Not because I like reading this stuff, but because so few have the courage to actually write the truth. You have no idea how many stories I've ran into that depict Bella falling in love with Edward when they come into contact like this, along with different variations. So few get the reality of what slaves (whether it's sex or "servent" type) actually encounter, and what their mental psyche consists of. While it pains me to actually think of the reality of these occurrences, I'm glad to know some people have the gut to post, let alone write, them for the world to see.
~Cynthia
11/4/2016 c1 kim01338
Honestly, didn't expect this. The story is disgusting, I read it just before going to bed and of course couldn't sleep whole night...
Honestly, didn't expect this. The story is disgusting, I read it just before going to bed and of course couldn't sleep whole night...
9/12/2016 c1 1bigdarkeyes
I'm crying. Reading this was difficult, it made my chest hurt, thank you for writing it.
1bigdarkeyesI'm crying. Reading this was difficult, it made my chest hurt, thank you for writing it.
7/30/2016 c1 Ariya120
I physically applauded your AN after reading this. Well, after I cried, anyway. Thank you.
I physically applauded your AN after reading this. Well, after I cried, anyway. Thank you.
5/14/2016 c1 Anabel
I'm heartbroken, just for the thought of so many people living that as I read... God, have mercy of their souls.
I'm heartbroken, just for the thought of so many people living that as I read... God, have mercy of their souls.
2/14/2016 c1 Feminine Archetype
There are no words to say but "thank you". I appreciate your voice and truth on this matter!
There are no words to say but "thank you". I appreciate your voice and truth on this matter!