for Work It Out10/12/2017 c15 dolphinsred
Great job on the story Hope you finish the story you can do it
Great job on the story Hope you finish the story you can do it
4/2/2013 c15 Guest
First off, I hate incompleted stories. Second, you had spelling mistakes. Other than that, I liked the story. It would have made more sense if the characters of Ami and Makoto were swapped. It was weird how he went from womaniser to loving her so quickly. I'm sure Beryl is the one who arranged her attack.
First off, I hate incompleted stories. Second, you had spelling mistakes. Other than that, I liked the story. It would have made more sense if the characters of Ami and Makoto were swapped. It was weird how he went from womaniser to loving her so quickly. I'm sure Beryl is the one who arranged her attack.
8/19/2012 c15 
11TropicalRemix
what's up with rei. she doesn't sound like a nice person. We'll she was never really nice to her in the show either.
11TropicalRemixwhat's up with rei. she doesn't sound like a nice person. We'll she was never really nice to her in the show either.
8/19/2012 c15 GnoogPrincess
Wow! I lurve Usagi and Mamour! Good Story!
Wow! I lurve Usagi and Mamour! Good Story!
8/12/2012 c14 Guest
Nice story
Nice story
7/21/2012 c14 CherryCherrios
Please update the story! Its so goood! want to know what happens next (:
Please update the story! Its so goood! want to know what happens next (: