for Evolution: Times of Change4/16/2011 c2 Magnus
Interesting story so far. Liked what you've done with it. Bit of a suggestion, BB's to old to be called beast boy. How about, Chimera. A Chimera is a blending of different animals, which is always what I thought the beast was. Plus BB can becaome all the different animals.
Interesting story so far. Liked what you've done with it. Bit of a suggestion, BB's to old to be called beast boy. How about, Chimera. A Chimera is a blending of different animals, which is always what I thought the beast was. Plus BB can becaome all the different animals.
4/7/2011 c2 The Cretin
Great update. You have a good eye for detail. The dialogue was also well written. To top it all, this story develops at a good pace. I also have to say that I agree with your assessment. Gar is a goldmine of stories and potential that has rarely been called upon. Can't wait to read more. Keep rockin.
Great update. You have a good eye for detail. The dialogue was also well written. To top it all, this story develops at a good pace. I also have to say that I agree with your assessment. Gar is a goldmine of stories and potential that has rarely been called upon. Can't wait to read more. Keep rockin.
4/7/2011 c2 
48Wolvmbm
Once again this was a great update to your storyline. It seems that Garfield has a lot to tell Raven, but who knows if Raven will understand his reasons or not ? :(
Still it was a nice update and I wish for you to keep up the good work upon such a great storyline idea like this one. ;)
48WolvmbmOnce again this was a great update to your storyline. It seems that Garfield has a lot to tell Raven, but who knows if Raven will understand his reasons or not ? :(
Still it was a nice update and I wish for you to keep up the good work upon such a great storyline idea like this one. ;)
4/7/2011 c2 gamehead64
they didn't tell BB he has to eat the wig
they didn't tell BB he has to eat the wig
4/6/2011 c2 Aqua Rules
Great story so far! Really looking forward to reading this! Please keep updating! :D
Great story so far! Really looking forward to reading this! Please keep updating! :D
4/6/2011 c2 1AvidReader95
Good story keep it up dude. And hey if I can make a suggestion maybe could give beast boy some new tricks like if you've ever played the game "prototype" give him some of those powers cuz he is a shapeshifter so I don't get why he only uses animal forms. Anyway I love the story keep it up
1AvidReader95Good story keep it up dude. And hey if I can make a suggestion maybe could give beast boy some new tricks like if you've ever played the game "prototype" give him some of those powers cuz he is a shapeshifter so I don't get why he only uses animal forms. Anyway I love the story keep it up
4/6/2011 c2 13Densharr
Huh. You know, this is terribly ironic. I read through the prologue, then decide to add you to alerts. I then proceed to reread the chapter, preparing to review, when I get told that the next chapter is out.
Anyways, looks like you're off to a great start. Can't wait to see who the farther afield members (Titans East, Honoraries, etc...) react. I wonder what Rae's going to do now that BB's finally back...
13DensharrHuh. You know, this is terribly ironic. I read through the prologue, then decide to add you to alerts. I then proceed to reread the chapter, preparing to review, when I get told that the next chapter is out.
Anyways, looks like you're off to a great start. Can't wait to see who the farther afield members (Titans East, Honoraries, etc...) react. I wonder what Rae's going to do now that BB's finally back...
4/6/2011 c2 69TheForceIsStrongWithThisOne
Ha! I knew it, BB saved Raven's hide!
What I don't know is what is going to happen next.
69TheForceIsStrongWithThisOneHa! I knew it, BB saved Raven's hide!
What I don't know is what is going to happen next.
3/31/2011 c1 The Cretin
First of all, awesome name dude. I'm a die hard BB fan thru and thru so stories where he does loner missions, soul searching, etc. interest me. Many who don't like him often say he couldn't cut it alone or as a leader. I'm interested to see how he's progressed. Not to mention that for a first fic, yer story rocks. I hope you'll let me read more. Welcome to fanfic. May you write many good one. If someone flames you just tell them The Cretin said to piss off. Kudos on a good story. Keep rockin.
First of all, awesome name dude. I'm a die hard BB fan thru and thru so stories where he does loner missions, soul searching, etc. interest me. Many who don't like him often say he couldn't cut it alone or as a leader. I'm interested to see how he's progressed. Not to mention that for a first fic, yer story rocks. I hope you'll let me read more. Welcome to fanfic. May you write many good one. If someone flames you just tell them The Cretin said to piss off. Kudos on a good story. Keep rockin.
3/31/2011 c1 TheForceIsStrongWithThisOne
Nice beginning and cliffhanger. I like how you had them evolve as they grew up (I like stories where they are young adults).
Also, I have a hunch that a green changeling is going to appear out of nowhere and save Raven
Nice beginning and cliffhanger. I like how you had them evolve as they grew up (I like stories where they are young adults).
Also, I have a hunch that a green changeling is going to appear out of nowhere and save Raven