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1/22/2015 c5 J
Good!
9/10/2014 c1 This is bad
Your writing is horrible. When I read it, it makes me want to throw up. The spelling and grammar is so bad, it is like a two year old wrote it. Actually, a two year old would write the story better than you.
2/6/2013 c1 GCD
This fanfiction is literally a joke. It is under an M rating, yet you use number signs to cover up vulgar language. Also, the grammar is just ridiculous, constantly switching between past and present tense. Story line and strong vocabulary is lacking.
1/16/2013 c6 Guest
Neji and hinata are cousins
1/5/2013 c21 52xxredemption-love-and-liesxx
DRAMATIC. Seriously damn... Can't believe he'd do that... *gets a shotgun and shoots Sasuke* Haha :))
Can't wait for the next one ;))
1/5/2013 c21 sasuke-rox-my-sox-1
tragic [
1/4/2013 c14 sasuke-rox-my-sox-1
yay sasuke smile :)- like that haha
1/4/2013 c12 sasuke-rox-my-sox-1
aww sasusaku love :)
1/4/2013 c11 sasuke-rox-my-sox-1
yay they in love :)
1/4/2013 c10 sasuke-rox-my-sox-1
wo thats all i can say is wo that was a intense chapter ha
1/4/2013 c9 sasuke-rox-my-sox-1
aww sakura and baby moment :)
1/4/2013 c8 sasuke-rox-my-sox-1
oh no tragedy...ahh!
1/4/2013 c7 sasuke-rox-my-sox-1
this chapter was intense omg i loved it ahhh!
1/4/2013 c6 sasuke-rox-my-sox-1
oh oh sakura in danger i think...
1/4/2013 c5 sasuke-rox-my-sox-1
aww pissy im warming up to him his name makes me laugh tho haha ...loving the story still ]
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