
6/9/2016 c1
19Smiling Seshat
It's a nice first chapter, though at times some of the paragraphs seem a little too large for my tastes and should be separated in two so it's easier for the eyes to read.

It's a nice first chapter, though at times some of the paragraphs seem a little too large for my tastes and should be separated in two so it's easier for the eyes to read.
4/14/2013 c1 gandalf
Sorry I'm putting this here, I know it has nothing to do with this, but I'm using someone else's computer and al I can do is put reviews, so the only way I can say anything is like this. About that Doctor Who/Kino's Journey crossover, I don't know why everyone's saying they're in character. The Doctor doesn't drink.
Sorry I'm putting this here, I know it has nothing to do with this, but I'm using someone else's computer and al I can do is put reviews, so the only way I can say anything is like this. About that Doctor Who/Kino's Journey crossover, I don't know why everyone's saying they're in character. The Doctor doesn't drink.