
7/21/2011 c1
11I'm NO Angel haha
Okay...I change my mind. Before I said that carnival Man was the the most adorable, sweetest and cutest thing I've ever read, but this was even better.
This was so sweet I think I might have cavities.
:)

Okay...I change my mind. Before I said that carnival Man was the the most adorable, sweetest and cutest thing I've ever read, but this was even better.
This was so sweet I think I might have cavities.
:)
4/8/2011 c1
24NICHA
(Well, holy crap, I didn't realize that YOU wrote this!)
:D
(that wasn't an insult. I'm just ridiculously slow sometimes.)
But anyways, I really liked this story.
Oneshots are my Dave and this one was def well written and totally IC!
Also, I enjoy the setting.
SN.

(Well, holy crap, I didn't realize that YOU wrote this!)
:D
(that wasn't an insult. I'm just ridiculously slow sometimes.)
But anyways, I really liked this story.
Oneshots are my Dave and this one was def well written and totally IC!
Also, I enjoy the setting.
SN.
4/4/2011 c1
94NaruSasuNaruLover
that was cute...I love one-shots, I really do, I just think this would have been better as a chapter fic...I would have liked to see their relationship grow, only because at this point it feels like they communicate in insults and like each because of looks and little things they may know about each other...I liked how Sasuke acted that he didn't care but even if you made them civil toward each other, he still could have gone into jerk mode and acted like he didn't care that he was leaving - I feel as if small talk isn't enough to make someone move away from their friends and everything they have for something they may not be sure of...Maybe I just drag stories on, but I would have liked to have seen them start with banter at the station, then maybe move to actually talking outside of it, and maybe even have had them talk on the phone once Naruto left before he decided that he really wanted to be with him more than he wanted to be in the United States where his home was...but again don't get me wrong I did really like the story it was cute, I just think it has potential to be a lot more...oh and I really can't see Sasuke working at a petrol station, but you made it work...sorry for the really long review

that was cute...I love one-shots, I really do, I just think this would have been better as a chapter fic...I would have liked to see their relationship grow, only because at this point it feels like they communicate in insults and like each because of looks and little things they may know about each other...I liked how Sasuke acted that he didn't care but even if you made them civil toward each other, he still could have gone into jerk mode and acted like he didn't care that he was leaving - I feel as if small talk isn't enough to make someone move away from their friends and everything they have for something they may not be sure of...Maybe I just drag stories on, but I would have liked to have seen them start with banter at the station, then maybe move to actually talking outside of it, and maybe even have had them talk on the phone once Naruto left before he decided that he really wanted to be with him more than he wanted to be in the United States where his home was...but again don't get me wrong I did really like the story it was cute, I just think it has potential to be a lot more...oh and I really can't see Sasuke working at a petrol station, but you made it work...sorry for the really long review
4/3/2011 c1 T. F
It was really sweet. I quite liked it. Keep up the good work :)
It was really sweet. I quite liked it. Keep up the good work :)