for Cold Utopia11/25/2011 c1 Jynx101
boring drabble is NOT boring.
this was dark and twisted and I loved it. it really explains how vegeta ends up being such a stuck up prick later in life but i still feel terrible for him. i also thought you did a great job keeping everyone in character, i can totally see this being canon.
i also wouldn't mind reading the extended version but for now my imagination will suffice ;)
boring drabble is NOT boring.
this was dark and twisted and I loved it. it really explains how vegeta ends up being such a stuck up prick later in life but i still feel terrible for him. i also thought you did a great job keeping everyone in character, i can totally see this being canon.
i also wouldn't mind reading the extended version but for now my imagination will suffice ;)
7/24/2011 c1 ButterflyArtist
Frieza is an A-hole, I really dont like him even as a villian. Other villians are afraid of him, so that makes him a villian among villians. (sorry to use the word villian so many times)
Poor Veggie, that has 2b so embarasing. Taking off your clothes in front people like that. Well not really Razit or Nappa, becus they kno frieza is evil and pervertage. But Zarbon and Dadoria those asses, it as sooooo embarasing. I feel for u Veggie!
Frieza is an A-hole, I really dont like him even as a villian. Other villians are afraid of him, so that makes him a villian among villians. (sorry to use the word villian so many times)
Poor Veggie, that has 2b so embarasing. Taking off your clothes in front people like that. Well not really Razit or Nappa, becus they kno frieza is evil and pervertage. But Zarbon and Dadoria those asses, it as sooooo embarasing. I feel for u Veggie!
5/16/2011 c1 
3AuraSidelong
Amazingly written. Eerie, twisted, and deliciously creepy. I don't usually enjoy fanfictions, but this was strangely like reading dark poetry and I enjoyed it very much. The pacing is steady, and the subtly is so vivid. I appreciate a work of good taste. You have a talent.
3AuraSidelongAmazingly written. Eerie, twisted, and deliciously creepy. I don't usually enjoy fanfictions, but this was strangely like reading dark poetry and I enjoyed it very much. The pacing is steady, and the subtly is so vivid. I appreciate a work of good taste. You have a talent.
4/25/2011 c1 wallflower-chan
correction: intriguing drabble IS INTRIGUING.
liked the mind-fuckery loads more than i should have, probably!
great diction and pace! :D
correction: intriguing drabble IS INTRIGUING.
liked the mind-fuckery loads more than i should have, probably!
great diction and pace! :D
4/4/2011 c1 5634977
It's always been my own personal head-canon that Vegeta's shortness had something to do with Frieza (being the little bastard he is) intentionally starving him... and this story took that thought and brought it to its utterly horrifying conclusion.
Seriously, well done. I've never seen Frieza's character dealt with quite like this, and I have to say that this kind of psychosis suits him well.
Annnnd totally irrelevant side-note, but your A/N made me literally lol. That's always an accomplishment.
Also, I think I'm glad that you aborted the potential orgy as orchestrated by Frieza at the end? I think? But at the same time I'm morbidly curious? D:
It's always been my own personal head-canon that Vegeta's shortness had something to do with Frieza (being the little bastard he is) intentionally starving him... and this story took that thought and brought it to its utterly horrifying conclusion.
Seriously, well done. I've never seen Frieza's character dealt with quite like this, and I have to say that this kind of psychosis suits him well.
Annnnd totally irrelevant side-note, but your A/N made me literally lol. That's always an accomplishment.
Also, I think I'm glad that you aborted the potential orgy as orchestrated by Frieza at the end? I think? But at the same time I'm morbidly curious? D:
4/3/2011 c1 Ichigo777
I liked it a lot - you really delved into the relationship a bit more... A sequel, please?
I liked it a lot - you really delved into the relationship a bit more... A sequel, please?