for A True Friend5/21/2012 c4 Scarlet
The chapters are far to short, they could be a bit longer, but i like your story. i cant wait to see want happens when sasuke leaves the leaf village to go to the sound village with the fox and what will happen when he gets older after he kills Orochimaru.
The chapters are far to short, they could be a bit longer, but i like your story. i cant wait to see want happens when sasuke leaves the leaf village to go to the sound village with the fox and what will happen when he gets older after he kills Orochimaru.
5/21/2012 c4 
9time-twilight
Good chapter i was wondering if u could make da chapters longer and when is da next chapter chapter cumin out! if u can try and make the story the same as the anime. keep up the good work.
9time-twilightGood chapter i was wondering if u could make da chapters longer and when is da next chapter chapter cumin out! if u can try and make the story the same as the anime. keep up the good work.
5/11/2012 c4 3Kio 'Key-Oh
I like it so far but your chapters are far too short. You've basically got a paragraph per page. All four chapters could have easily fitted into your first chapter and perhaps even been prologue.
Also is the fox in a different tree to the one he was originally found in as you said Sasuke picked him up and hurried towards his house?
You have a good amount of detail in there but it could be better.
Still I would happily read more of this story should you post future chapters.
3Kio 'Key-OhI like it so far but your chapters are far too short. You've basically got a paragraph per page. All four chapters could have easily fitted into your first chapter and perhaps even been prologue.
Also is the fox in a different tree to the one he was originally found in as you said Sasuke picked him up and hurried towards his house?
You have a good amount of detail in there but it could be better.
Still I would happily read more of this story should you post future chapters.
5/1/2012 c4 1magicaltoothbrush
This story seems really interesting! I Never really thought of this situation where Naruto would be a fox and Sasuke would be human. Update soon
1magicaltoothbrushThis story seems really interesting! I Never really thought of this situation where Naruto would be a fox and Sasuke would be human. Update soon
4/12/2011 c1 Kaze Kyuubi
The chapters are a little short but still a great plot. I like these kinds of stories. Keep it up.
The chapters are a little short but still a great plot. I like these kinds of stories. Keep it up.
4/4/2011 c2 Aldryl
Aaw, cute :3 I really like this idea of plot! Though the chapters are quite short I am sure that will change with practice. Keep the good work up, I am curious of how you will develop your story :)
Aaw, cute :3 I really like this idea of plot! Though the chapters are quite short I am sure that will change with practice. Keep the good work up, I am curious of how you will develop your story :)