for Sit Boy! I'm An Untrained Miko4/6/2011 c3 
32Pokahydee
I have to say I prefer reading dialogue inside of "" instead of like this chapter. You're doing a great job. My main suggestion is maybe make the chapters longer because they're REALLY short. Other than that you're doing great!
32PokahydeeI have to say I prefer reading dialogue inside of "" instead of like this chapter. You're doing a great job. My main suggestion is maybe make the chapters longer because they're REALLY short. Other than that you're doing great!
4/6/2011 c2 Pokahydee
Hehe! This is so silly! A little short but it's definitely goofy! Can't wait to read more. Off to the next chapter!
Hehe! This is so silly! A little short but it's definitely goofy! Can't wait to read more. Off to the next chapter!
4/4/2011 c1 Pokahydee
Lol! This looks like it's going to be HIGHLY amusing. Didn't really notice any spelling or grammar errors. Lol, if I have any in my review I'm typing on my droid on a moving bus. I hope you continue this!
Lol! This looks like it's going to be HIGHLY amusing. Didn't really notice any spelling or grammar errors. Lol, if I have any in my review I'm typing on my droid on a moving bus. I hope you continue this!