for Now You Know7/12/2019 c1 derek
tifa hissing saying telling yelling to cloud wth is wrong with you what do you mean that you finally had me listen up you always had me you just didn't see that I love you
tifa hissing saying telling yelling to cloud wth is wrong with you what do you mean that you finally had me listen up you always had me you just didn't see that I love you
1/5/2010 c1 Princess Euphy
JESUS CHRIST THIS IS SHIT!
why the hell are u wrting stories! i mean really first of all u dissed out all the fuckin cleris fans and have a suckish stories! going around and hating a a fictional person even tho there is milions of cleris fans out there to diss oout ur story that sux ass!
and its WAY to fast!...u ruined the whole meaning of a closed and to-himself Cloud!
JESUS CHRIST THIS IS SHIT!
why the hell are u wrting stories! i mean really first of all u dissed out all the fuckin cleris fans and have a suckish stories! going around and hating a a fictional person even tho there is milions of cleris fans out there to diss oout ur story that sux ass!
and its WAY to fast!...u ruined the whole meaning of a closed and to-himself Cloud!
12/2/2006 c1 
4luvin-it
Too rushed.
And I, being a HUGE Cloti fan, thinks it needs major improvements. Add details, setting, and try to keep Cloud in character, since he seems too open here.
4luvin-itToo rushed.
And I, being a HUGE Cloti fan, thinks it needs major improvements. Add details, setting, and try to keep Cloud in character, since he seems too open here.
4/8/2004 c1 2evening cannette
No offense, but you seem to flame many stories, if I were you, I'd start writing better stories and have a little more respect for Cleris people. I am a diehard Cloti fan but I don't go around dissing Aeris. Know why? Because as hateful as Aeris maybe, SHE"S NOT REAL DAMNIT!
2evening cannetteNo offense, but you seem to flame many stories, if I were you, I'd start writing better stories and have a little more respect for Cleris people. I am a diehard Cloti fan but I don't go around dissing Aeris. Know why? Because as hateful as Aeris maybe, SHE"S NOT REAL DAMNIT!
12/6/2003 c1 1trixieshairflip
No offense, but I am a cleris person, so I didn't like it, and not to mention it was a little rushed...
But DON'T take this personaly! If I were a "Cloti" fan as you call it, I might have liked it...maybe...
1trixieshairflipNo offense, but I am a cleris person, so I didn't like it, and not to mention it was a little rushed...
But DON'T take this personaly! If I were a "Cloti" fan as you call it, I might have liked it...maybe...
9/22/2003 c1 yesyousuckXD
Ya this fan fiction sucks major ass!
Since you flamed me for my cleris fan fic, then you're going to get the same from me!
BO!
Ya this fan fiction sucks major ass!
Since you flamed me for my cleris fan fic, then you're going to get the same from me!
BO!
11/2/2002 c1 Flesh-N-Bone
Hey Flying Rainbow... what the hell do you think?
Hey Flying Rainbow... what the hell do you think?
10/8/2002 c1 Flying Rainbow
Are you the one that keeps flaming me? Because I would gladly love to return them ^_^
Are you the one that keeps flaming me? Because I would gladly love to return them ^_^
9/4/2002 c1 Cloti81953
yeah! WOo hoo! CloTi ALL THE WAY! I wrote few cloti stories myself.. So please try some of them :D Well, please write some more clotis. I loved this one!
yeah! WOo hoo! CloTi ALL THE WAY! I wrote few cloti stories myself.. So please try some of them :D Well, please write some more clotis. I loved this one!
8/11/2002 c1 2TisforTwee
o_o;
Ummmmmm...
Sort!
I can see you like Tifa and not Aeris, and thats why you dissed my story lol
2TisforTweeo_o;
Ummmmmm...
Sort!
I can see you like Tifa and not Aeris, and thats why you dissed my story lol
7/25/2002 c1 2PennStGuy
Well maybe this has finally tilted open the gate for me writing good fanfiction. My storylines need some major improvement and it wouldn't hurt to make them longer then maybe I can become an author that rarely gets flames and maybe become a half decent writer in the process
As always,
Flesh-N-Bone
2PennStGuyWell maybe this has finally tilted open the gate for me writing good fanfiction. My storylines need some major improvement and it wouldn't hurt to make them longer then maybe I can become an author that rarely gets flames and maybe become a half decent writer in the process
As always,
Flesh-N-Bone