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10/21/2012 c1 Glostara
You NEED to do another chapter. You MUST! :D
5/2/2012 c1 3Sunny-Blue-Sky
Ello april:)

Ive no idea why im reviewing fanfiction at such a random time but oh well. I read the leviathan trilogy too this year and loved it~

Still need to read goliath though :(

But so adorable... I can totally see aushun from this, though alex is more like artemis fowl ne? Maybe artemis x holly...
7/9/2011 c1 D.M.Arias
WRITE,WRITE,WRITE!ME WANT MORE!:)
4/8/2011 c1 2starryblueboxes
This is so good! I love Deryn and Alek's interactions. Also, Dr. Barlow and Volger! haha
4/8/2011 c1 Guest
This is good, but rather heavy on the slang. Maybe tone it down, a little? Asides from that, really nice, one of the better ones I've read.
4/8/2011 c1 Pony
I loved it! Only a few things...

When alek said "deryn, where r u" or something like that, did he know dylans a boy? Also, volger asked wat something thought about her... Did u mean her? I was confused if they all knew deryn was a girl... Cuz it didn't seem like it...

Also, it was a little rushed...

But overall, I LOVED it! Isn't this series awesome! :)
4/8/2011 c1 2Milkshake308
Very well written, and just the right amount of fluff!

I love the idea of Volger/Barlow, the way you've portrayed them is perfect!

:D

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