1/11 c68 2TripleA96
this is by far the best story ive read on this site.
i dont usually write reviews, mostly because i dont want anyone knowing i still visit this site with my abandoned stories, but i have to let you know that you wrote an enticing story.
did i get lost at points? yes
did it come back together as the chapters progressed? yes, and for that you've done what most cannot do.
the ending, while unsatisfying, is completely satisfying.
this isnt the typical type of story i read, but i am glad i did.
ill keep an eye out for any potential future story you have in store, although i underatand that as age comes its less likely to happen.
also your ending leaves openings for one shot's with random remembrances (i am 90% sure that doesnt spoil anything the way i worded that)
this is by far the best story ive read on this site.
i dont usually write reviews, mostly because i dont want anyone knowing i still visit this site with my abandoned stories, but i have to let you know that you wrote an enticing story.
did i get lost at points? yes
did it come back together as the chapters progressed? yes, and for that you've done what most cannot do.
the ending, while unsatisfying, is completely satisfying.
this isnt the typical type of story i read, but i am glad i did.
ill keep an eye out for any potential future story you have in store, although i underatand that as age comes its less likely to happen.
also your ending leaves openings for one shot's with random remembrances (i am 90% sure that doesnt spoil anything the way i worded that)
1/11 c68 Snowblinder9
Not sure how to feel about the ending. It was good but also quite depressing. I assume ending kind of points towards Naruto eventually going to different continents to find a place where he feels he belongs. Which as readers we know where that is.
Seeing how the world differs due to no war would also be interesting and what a lot of the characters got up to.
Not sure how to feel about the ending. It was good but also quite depressing. I assume ending kind of points towards Naruto eventually going to different continents to find a place where he feels he belongs. Which as readers we know where that is.
Seeing how the world differs due to no war would also be interesting and what a lot of the characters got up to.
1/8 c1 billsazguard
Heyya buddy, I hope you are doing good, well I just read your story I Will Become a Ghost and I loved it! I'm thinking about adapting it into my comic style and would be super excited to do so, and it will be a commission work, I think you'll really like the results, and maybe you'll even want to share it. by the way, I'm a digital artist open for commissions and I have worked on comics with authors across different platforms, I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic, cus the characters you got are fr kinda giving me magical vibes like fantasy characters! I do all sorts of artwork and have some slots available. My rates are fair, and I always deliver high-quality work. If you're interested, let's talk more on Discord_
My Discord: yushishigawa
Hope to hear from you soon
Heyya buddy, I hope you are doing good, well I just read your story I Will Become a Ghost and I loved it! I'm thinking about adapting it into my comic style and would be super excited to do so, and it will be a commission work, I think you'll really like the results, and maybe you'll even want to share it. by the way, I'm a digital artist open for commissions and I have worked on comics with authors across different platforms, I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic, cus the characters you got are fr kinda giving me magical vibes like fantasy characters! I do all sorts of artwork and have some slots available. My rates are fair, and I always deliver high-quality work. If you're interested, let's talk more on Discord_
My Discord: yushishigawa
Hope to hear from you soon
12/30/2024 c68 Czer1112
I don't know how to feel about this ending. While I'm happy, at the same time I'm not, they didn't end up together after all. Great story regardless.
I don't know how to feel about this ending. While I'm happy, at the same time I'm not, they didn't end up together after all. Great story regardless.
12/30/2024 c68 Stalker1
A fine ending indeed. maybe on the shorter side but it concluded the story well .
Thanks for the Long and entertaining Ride and it's time to bid goodbye
A fine ending indeed. maybe on the shorter side but it concluded the story well .
Thanks for the Long and entertaining Ride and it's time to bid goodbye
12/30/2024 c67 Alan800
Gracias Me encantó el final. Como vos decías el tema principal es el sacrificio y por eso me gusto tu historia y la conclusión es muy buena manteniendo el sentido de la historia y no forzando un guión asociado con la intervención de kami
Gracias Me encantó el final. Como vos decías el tema principal es el sacrificio y por eso me gusto tu historia y la conclusión es muy buena manteniendo el sentido de la historia y no forzando un guión asociado con la intervención de kami
12/30/2024 c67 1Nithi velu
It's been a great story. I won't give any review for the end as I enjoyed the story so far. Right or wrong I enjoyed it. That's it. I really wish you would write a new story. Anyway Good luck and All the best. Once again thanks for the wonderful story.
It's been a great story. I won't give any review for the end as I enjoyed the story so far. Right or wrong I enjoyed it. That's it. I really wish you would write a new story. Anyway Good luck and All the best. Once again thanks for the wonderful story.
12/30/2024 c68 1Gamesdean1
perfect ending all i have to say. thank you for staying with and finishing the story. 1 question i have though if time was reset wouldn't that mean the Akatsuki would be back and are hunting the tailed beats so what happened to obits / Nagatos plans? would love to see an epilogue going over the world through like a birds eyes view or through the POV of Kami / Shinigami. to close off thanks for giving us such a good read.
perfect ending all i have to say. thank you for staying with and finishing the story. 1 question i have though if time was reset wouldn't that mean the Akatsuki would be back and are hunting the tailed beats so what happened to obits / Nagatos plans? would love to see an epilogue going over the world through like a birds eyes view or through the POV of Kami / Shinigami. to close off thanks for giving us such a good read.
12/24/2024 c67 Guest
Hey it’s Jake merry Christmas hope things are okay for ya
Hey it’s Jake merry Christmas hope things are okay for ya
12/25/2024 c1 Vinay-kox01
Hey!
I just finished reading your story "I Will Become a Ghost", and I absolutely loved it! I'd be super excited to adapt it into a comic or animation in my own style. I'm a digital artist and currently open for commission projects. I always aim to deliver work that I think you'd really enjoy, and hopefully, want to share too! My rates are fair, and I make sure the quality is top-notch every time.
If you’re interested, let's chat more I’d love to bring your story to life! You can reach me on
Discord: graphic_gold
Twitter: VKox139175
Instagram: vinaykox1
Hope to hear from you soon!
Hey!
I just finished reading your story "I Will Become a Ghost", and I absolutely loved it! I'd be super excited to adapt it into a comic or animation in my own style. I'm a digital artist and currently open for commission projects. I always aim to deliver work that I think you'd really enjoy, and hopefully, want to share too! My rates are fair, and I make sure the quality is top-notch every time.
If you’re interested, let's chat more I’d love to bring your story to life! You can reach me on
Discord: graphic_gold
Twitter: VKox139175
Instagram: vinaykox1
Hope to hear from you soon!
11/22/2024 c1 Jsmine Lucas
I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "I Will Become a Ghost" and was truly captivated by its unique narrative and creativity. The depth and imagination in your work inspired me alot. I think this is the best story which i never ever read the way you described and the emotions like each and everything is incredible. It's too good would love to hear about your upcoming stories. I'm an artist if you would like to give me a chance to draw some of your characters for your stories or something like coverart for your story so that would be my truly honour to work with you also i'll share some dope ideas with you feel free to dm.
Discord: jasminelucas12
Instagram: jasmineluc_official
Email:
I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "I Will Become a Ghost" and was truly captivated by its unique narrative and creativity. The depth and imagination in your work inspired me alot. I think this is the best story which i never ever read the way you described and the emotions like each and everything is incredible. It's too good would love to hear about your upcoming stories. I'm an artist if you would like to give me a chance to draw some of your characters for your stories or something like coverart for your story so that would be my truly honour to work with you also i'll share some dope ideas with you feel free to dm.
Discord: jasminelucas12
Instagram: jasmineluc_official
Email:
10/30/2024 c67 Guest
Hey it’s Jake I’m officially a homeowner man what a circus your forced to go through bank wise but enough about me THANKS FOR ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER! IM WITH YOU TILL THE END OF THIS AWESOME STORY!
Hey it’s Jake I’m officially a homeowner man what a circus your forced to go through bank wise but enough about me THANKS FOR ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER! IM WITH YOU TILL THE END OF THIS AWESOME STORY!
11/1/2024 c1 Lisa-Katagiri
Hi there
How are you? I hope I’m not causing any inconvenience. I recently read your story "I Will Become a Ghost" and genuinely enjoyed it. I’ve been thinking about turning it into a comic in my style, and I believe it would be an exciting commission project. I'm confident you would also be pleased with the results and might even consider sharing it.
As an experienced digital artist, I am currently open for commissions, and I would love to adapt your wonderful story into a comic format. If you're interested in commissioning me for this project, we can discuss the details further either in the general chat or on Discord.
My Discord is lisakatagiri,
and I’d be happy to chat about pricing, timelines, and how we can bring your story to life in a visually engaging way.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Thank you!
Hi there
How are you? I hope I’m not causing any inconvenience. I recently read your story "I Will Become a Ghost" and genuinely enjoyed it. I’ve been thinking about turning it into a comic in my style, and I believe it would be an exciting commission project. I'm confident you would also be pleased with the results and might even consider sharing it.
As an experienced digital artist, I am currently open for commissions, and I would love to adapt your wonderful story into a comic format. If you're interested in commissioning me for this project, we can discuss the details further either in the general chat or on Discord.
My Discord is lisakatagiri,
and I’d be happy to chat about pricing, timelines, and how we can bring your story to life in a visually engaging way.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Thank you!
10/30/2024 c2 estrellajuana291
Oh wow these first tow chapters are really amazing I really enjoy it a lot..
Oh wow these first tow chapters are really amazing I really enjoy it a lot..