for I Will Become a Ghost2/25 c63 kratos264
So he was tied to it even after losing his arm which was where the tatoo was? So he lost the ability to use the power yet it somehow still killed him what a terrible explaination
So he was tied to it even after losing his arm which was where the tatoo was? So he lost the ability to use the power yet it somehow still killed him what a terrible explaination
2/24 c6 kratos264
Why is ghost so arrogant when hes honestly kind of weak, 7 years of training and hes not even at kakashis level?
Why is ghost so arrogant when hes honestly kind of weak, 7 years of training and hes not even at kakashis level?
2/15 c68 
2Astral8
Sorry for the late review but feels kind of crazy to see the story finally come to an end after all these years. Was a really fun ride!
I definitely understand your decision regarding Naruto. In my opinion it’s definitely more fitting for the story to end that way (although it still hurts my heart lol).
If you do ever plan to do an epilogue style chapter, I definitely wouldn’t mind more of an exploration into Mirarca pre-fall of everything. Also would like to cope that Kaguya exists if things are back to the regular timeline and inadvertently causes Naruto and Micheru to meet again (let me cope lol).
Nonetheless, loved reading along on this journey and can’t wait to see what you work on next!
2Astral8Sorry for the late review but feels kind of crazy to see the story finally come to an end after all these years. Was a really fun ride!
I definitely understand your decision regarding Naruto. In my opinion it’s definitely more fitting for the story to end that way (although it still hurts my heart lol).
If you do ever plan to do an epilogue style chapter, I definitely wouldn’t mind more of an exploration into Mirarca pre-fall of everything. Also would like to cope that Kaguya exists if things are back to the regular timeline and inadvertently causes Naruto and Micheru to meet again (let me cope lol).
Nonetheless, loved reading along on this journey and can’t wait to see what you work on next!
1/23 c67 The-Tobi
Man, this chapter was wild... seeing Kami. Like actual Kami. That was incredible.
Again, real sad to see this story go. But happy that it happened. Real amazing all around and I think it's ending nicely. I'm happy that it's getting the ending it deserves.
Thank you for the chapter!
Man, this chapter was wild... seeing Kami. Like actual Kami. That was incredible.
Again, real sad to see this story go. But happy that it happened. Real amazing all around and I think it's ending nicely. I'm happy that it's getting the ending it deserves.
Thank you for the chapter!
1/23 c68 The-Tobi
For some reason, the story was unfavorited so I didn't see the ending. But holy hell what a ride. I regret not being able to be here from the start as this was awesome. Kind of sad to see the ending. but... I'm happy that it happened! Most great fics never get an ending. I'm glad this one ended. And I look forward to see what you do next, dude.
Thank you for the chapter. It's been a wild ride.
For some reason, the story was unfavorited so I didn't see the ending. But holy hell what a ride. I regret not being able to be here from the start as this was awesome. Kind of sad to see the ending. but... I'm happy that it happened! Most great fics never get an ending. I'm glad this one ended. And I look forward to see what you do next, dude.
Thank you for the chapter. It's been a wild ride.
1/20 c1 Frostbound Reverie
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Hello,
I hope you're doing well. I recently read your story and found it truly outstanding and amazing. I am a commission artist specializing in comics and various forms of art. I create works that bring incredible stories like yours to life in a new format, such as comics and manga.
I would love to visualize your story, "I Will Become a Ghost" and I'm confident it would make an exceptional comic. Please note that I only work on a commission basis, and I wanted to make this absolutely clear upfront.
You can connect with me through the following platforms:
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Twitter: Feeliphee_
DeviantArt: ZamainLov
Email: zamainlov gmail. com
Looking forward to hearing from you!
1/19 c1 SilentOmen0
Hi, I hope you're doing well! I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading your "I Will Become a Ghost" The title immediately caught my attention, but the story itself went beyond all my expectations. Your storytelling is outstanding, and the characters are incredibly well developed. As I finished reading, I couldn’t help but imagine how amazing this story would look as a comic. The more I thought about it, the more convinced I became that it would shine in that format. A little about me I’m a professional artist specializing in a range of styles, and I work on commission. If you're interested, I’d love to discuss the idea of adapting your story into a comic. Feel free to reach out to me through email, Discord, or Twitter.
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Hi, I hope you're doing well! I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading your "I Will Become a Ghost" The title immediately caught my attention, but the story itself went beyond all my expectations. Your storytelling is outstanding, and the characters are incredibly well developed. As I finished reading, I couldn’t help but imagine how amazing this story would look as a comic. The more I thought about it, the more convinced I became that it would shine in that format. A little about me I’m a professional artist specializing in a range of styles, and I work on commission. If you're interested, I’d love to discuss the idea of adapting your story into a comic. Feel free to reach out to me through email, Discord, or Twitter.
Discord: goldendraws
Email:
Twitter: GoldenArtDraws
1/18 c68 Guest
Hey it’s Jake I just read the last chapter and I gotta say this truly was a amazing journey you took me on I’ll definitely check out your other stories you have a great gift for story telling btw I’m nicely settled in my house now thanks for finishing the story I had a blast!
Hey it’s Jake I just read the last chapter and I gotta say this truly was a amazing journey you took me on I’ll definitely check out your other stories you have a great gift for story telling btw I’m nicely settled in my house now thanks for finishing the story I had a blast!
1/11 c68 2TripleA96
this is by far the best story ive read on this site.
i dont usually write reviews, mostly because i dont want anyone knowing i still visit this site with my abandoned stories, but i have to let you know that you wrote an enticing story.
did i get lost at points? yes
did it come back together as the chapters progressed? yes, and for that you've done what most cannot do.
the ending, while unsatisfying, is completely satisfying.
this isnt the typical type of story i read, but i am glad i did.
ill keep an eye out for any potential future story you have in store, although i underatand that as age comes its less likely to happen.
also your ending leaves openings for one shot's with random remembrances (i am 90% sure that doesnt spoil anything the way i worded that)
2TripleA96this is by far the best story ive read on this site.
i dont usually write reviews, mostly because i dont want anyone knowing i still visit this site with my abandoned stories, but i have to let you know that you wrote an enticing story.
did i get lost at points? yes
did it come back together as the chapters progressed? yes, and for that you've done what most cannot do.
the ending, while unsatisfying, is completely satisfying.
this isnt the typical type of story i read, but i am glad i did.
ill keep an eye out for any potential future story you have in store, although i underatand that as age comes its less likely to happen.
also your ending leaves openings for one shot's with random remembrances (i am 90% sure that doesnt spoil anything the way i worded that)
1/11 c68 Snowblinder9
Not sure how to feel about the ending. It was good but also quite depressing. I assume ending kind of points towards Naruto eventually going to different continents to find a place where he feels he belongs. Which as readers we know where that is.
Seeing how the world differs due to no war would also be interesting and what a lot of the characters got up to.
Not sure how to feel about the ending. It was good but also quite depressing. I assume ending kind of points towards Naruto eventually going to different continents to find a place where he feels he belongs. Which as readers we know where that is.
Seeing how the world differs due to no war would also be interesting and what a lot of the characters got up to.
1/8 c1 billsazguard
Heyya buddy, I hope you are doing good, well I just read your story I Will Become a Ghost and I loved it! I'm thinking about adapting it into my comic style and would be super excited to do so, and it will be a commission work, I think you'll really like the results, and maybe you'll even want to share it. by the way, I'm a digital artist open for commissions and I have worked on comics with authors across different platforms, I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic, cus the characters you got are fr kinda giving me magical vibes like fantasy characters! I do all sorts of artwork and have some slots available. My rates are fair, and I always deliver high-quality work. If you're interested, let's talk more on Discord_
My Discord: yushishigawa
Hope to hear from you soon
Heyya buddy, I hope you are doing good, well I just read your story I Will Become a Ghost and I loved it! I'm thinking about adapting it into my comic style and would be super excited to do so, and it will be a commission work, I think you'll really like the results, and maybe you'll even want to share it. by the way, I'm a digital artist open for commissions and I have worked on comics with authors across different platforms, I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic, cus the characters you got are fr kinda giving me magical vibes like fantasy characters! I do all sorts of artwork and have some slots available. My rates are fair, and I always deliver high-quality work. If you're interested, let's talk more on Discord_
My Discord: yushishigawa
Hope to hear from you soon
12/30/2024 c68 Czer1112
I don't know how to feel about this ending. While I'm happy, at the same time I'm not, they didn't end up together after all. Great story regardless.
I don't know how to feel about this ending. While I'm happy, at the same time I'm not, they didn't end up together after all. Great story regardless.
12/30/2024 c68 Stalker1
A fine ending indeed. maybe on the shorter side but it concluded the story well .
Thanks for the Long and entertaining Ride and it's time to bid goodbye
A fine ending indeed. maybe on the shorter side but it concluded the story well .
Thanks for the Long and entertaining Ride and it's time to bid goodbye
12/30/2024 c67 Alan800
Gracias Me encantó el final. Como vos decías el tema principal es el sacrificio y por eso me gusto tu historia y la conclusión es muy buena manteniendo el sentido de la historia y no forzando un guión asociado con la intervención de kami
Gracias Me encantó el final. Como vos decías el tema principal es el sacrificio y por eso me gusto tu historia y la conclusión es muy buena manteniendo el sentido de la historia y no forzando un guión asociado con la intervención de kami
12/30/2024 c67 1Nithi velu
It's been a great story. I won't give any review for the end as I enjoyed the story so far. Right or wrong I enjoyed it. That's it. I really wish you would write a new story. Anyway Good luck and All the best. Once again thanks for the wonderful story.
1Nithi veluIt's been a great story. I won't give any review for the end as I enjoyed the story so far. Right or wrong I enjoyed it. That's it. I really wish you would write a new story. Anyway Good luck and All the best. Once again thanks for the wonderful story.