
11/22/2024 c1 Jsmine Lucas
I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "I Will Become a Ghost" and was truly captivated by its unique narrative and creativity. The depth and imagination in your work inspired me alot. I think this is the best story which i never ever read the way you described and the emotions like each and everything is incredible. It's too good would love to hear about your upcoming stories. I'm an artist if you would like to give me a chance to draw some of your characters for your stories or something like coverart for your story so that would be my truly honour to work with you also i'll share some dope ideas with you feel free to dm.
Discord: jasminelucas12
Instagram: jasmineluc_official
Email:
I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "I Will Become a Ghost" and was truly captivated by its unique narrative and creativity. The depth and imagination in your work inspired me alot. I think this is the best story which i never ever read the way you described and the emotions like each and everything is incredible. It's too good would love to hear about your upcoming stories. I'm an artist if you would like to give me a chance to draw some of your characters for your stories or something like coverart for your story so that would be my truly honour to work with you also i'll share some dope ideas with you feel free to dm.
Discord: jasminelucas12
Instagram: jasmineluc_official
Email:
10/30/2024 c67 Guest
Hey it’s Jake I’m officially a homeowner man what a circus your forced to go through bank wise but enough about me THANKS FOR ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER! IM WITH YOU TILL THE END OF THIS AWESOME STORY!
Hey it’s Jake I’m officially a homeowner man what a circus your forced to go through bank wise but enough about me THANKS FOR ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER! IM WITH YOU TILL THE END OF THIS AWESOME STORY!
11/1/2024 c1 Lisa-Katagiri
Hi there
How are you? I hope I’m not causing any inconvenience. I recently read your story "I Will Become a Ghost" and genuinely enjoyed it. I’ve been thinking about turning it into a comic in my style, and I believe it would be an exciting commission project. I'm confident you would also be pleased with the results and might even consider sharing it.
As an experienced digital artist, I am currently open for commissions, and I would love to adapt your wonderful story into a comic format. If you're interested in commissioning me for this project, we can discuss the details further either in the general chat or on Discord.
My Discord is lisakatagiri,
and I’d be happy to chat about pricing, timelines, and how we can bring your story to life in a visually engaging way.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Thank you!
Hi there
How are you? I hope I’m not causing any inconvenience. I recently read your story "I Will Become a Ghost" and genuinely enjoyed it. I’ve been thinking about turning it into a comic in my style, and I believe it would be an exciting commission project. I'm confident you would also be pleased with the results and might even consider sharing it.
As an experienced digital artist, I am currently open for commissions, and I would love to adapt your wonderful story into a comic format. If you're interested in commissioning me for this project, we can discuss the details further either in the general chat or on Discord.
My Discord is lisakatagiri,
and I’d be happy to chat about pricing, timelines, and how we can bring your story to life in a visually engaging way.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Thank you!
10/30/2024 c2 estrellajuana291
Oh wow these first tow chapters are really amazing I really enjoy it a lot..
Oh wow these first tow chapters are really amazing I really enjoy it a lot..
10/28/2024 c67
62Geo Soul
NOOOOOOOOO I WAITED YEARS TOO SEE THE END OF THIS AND YOU BLUEBALL ME WITH A CLIFFHANGER!? WHAT DID I DO TO DESERVE THIS!? I MEAN WHAT SPECIFICALLY!?

NOOOOOOOOO I WAITED YEARS TOO SEE THE END OF THIS AND YOU BLUEBALL ME WITH A CLIFFHANGER!? WHAT DID I DO TO DESERVE THIS!? I MEAN WHAT SPECIFICALLY!?
10/28/2024 c67 36Barry72
Not gonna lie, for some reason I thought this story was done already, it's nice to see it actually end
Not gonna lie, for some reason I thought this story was done already, it's nice to see it actually end
9/22/2024 c1 KingYamYam
This was so brain numbing! Another great chap tho! I actually love the way you portrayed Kami and The Shinigami
This was so brain numbing! Another great chap tho! I actually love the way you portrayed Kami and The Shinigami
9/7/2024 c66 Jake
Hope your doing well I’d love to read the end of this amazing story but I understand life is probably complicated mine is too I just bought a house and I’m lost on tons of stuff
Hope your doing well I’d love to read the end of this amazing story but I understand life is probably complicated mine is too I just bought a house and I’m lost on tons of stuff
7/4/2024 c66 Guest
Happy Fourth of July hope the story gets finished soon I’ll see it through to the end!
Happy Fourth of July hope the story gets finished soon I’ll see it through to the end!
5/26/2024 c12 Z-Breezy
What’s the point of leaving the village just to hang around the village and its people
What’s the point of leaving the village just to hang around the village and its people
5/25/2024 c66
3The-Tobi
Well, here we are again. Part two... After part one, I am a bit nervous to be honest. But, I'm here. I'm ready to read... or have read since this... writing's weird.
Hiruzen being in the Naruto equivalent of hell makes sense. But, Jiraya? I- Okay yeah I was about to say something, bring up canon but then I remembered where we were and that yeah, Jiraya should realistically go to hell. Anyways! I'm fascinated to see the answers that they had. It's incredible to see how much suffering they have to go through pretty much... It kinda makes me think about real life and that stuff, I think that's a terrifyingly amazing thing.
Kenpachi's army is just really daunting and this twist honestly makes it a whole lot more horrifying. They were always demons. It makes perfect sense though, also man... I think the Shinigami's been highly underused in the fandom beyond as a plot device, but seeing all the work and effort put into it's character here is honestly amazing. Like, the Shinigami's horrifying here. I really wonder what the deal between the Shinigami and Kami was... I feel like Kami fucked up greatly.
I think I'm getting at the game here. The Shinigami can't do anything in the real world because of the balance that needs to be kept in place. So, Michieru needs to destroy it... Before I say anything about that, I just want to say that god the dialogue between Naruto and the Shinigami is so fucking good. I've always loved your characters, and I think this is peak. Anyways, I wonder if I will be correct? Giving the Shinigami total control over everything isn't a good idea on the surface, but the Shinigami needs people to live so souls can keep coming in.
So, this was when Naruto was revived by Pain. I see. Minato, Jiraya, and Hiruzen did come in clutch there I think. Now, I'm excited to see where this goes next. The Shinigami is at the end of the day a creature that'll get what it wants I think. But, everyone else can also get what they want. I also think that god... this is absolutely depressing and I am a complete and total fan of it. You've absolutely killed it these last few chapters and honestly, I'm excited to see what's next as I read.
Naruto's knowledge is just the peak of depressing. Knowledge is power, but it can also be pain! And I think this is an absolutely perfect example of it. I do wonder how Michieru will be in both the land of the living and the dead though, that'll be interesting. And so... Itachi's gonna die too... Fuck man, you really gotta stab this dagger in deep, don't you? I'm sad again. Oh go- Yep... The depression is here!
Out of all the writers I've seen write sad and depressing stuff, you've always done it the best. And it shows here. And it *hurts*. At least Itachi gets to live thanks To Madato's death. I wonder if he's in hell, and if so what corner of it is he in. I hope that if Kami is brought back, Naruto can come back to... Or, Naruto can become god... Actually, if Naruto becomes Kami that would be really interesting.
Thank you for the chapter.

Well, here we are again. Part two... After part one, I am a bit nervous to be honest. But, I'm here. I'm ready to read... or have read since this... writing's weird.
Hiruzen being in the Naruto equivalent of hell makes sense. But, Jiraya? I- Okay yeah I was about to say something, bring up canon but then I remembered where we were and that yeah, Jiraya should realistically go to hell. Anyways! I'm fascinated to see the answers that they had. It's incredible to see how much suffering they have to go through pretty much... It kinda makes me think about real life and that stuff, I think that's a terrifyingly amazing thing.
Kenpachi's army is just really daunting and this twist honestly makes it a whole lot more horrifying. They were always demons. It makes perfect sense though, also man... I think the Shinigami's been highly underused in the fandom beyond as a plot device, but seeing all the work and effort put into it's character here is honestly amazing. Like, the Shinigami's horrifying here. I really wonder what the deal between the Shinigami and Kami was... I feel like Kami fucked up greatly.
I think I'm getting at the game here. The Shinigami can't do anything in the real world because of the balance that needs to be kept in place. So, Michieru needs to destroy it... Before I say anything about that, I just want to say that god the dialogue between Naruto and the Shinigami is so fucking good. I've always loved your characters, and I think this is peak. Anyways, I wonder if I will be correct? Giving the Shinigami total control over everything isn't a good idea on the surface, but the Shinigami needs people to live so souls can keep coming in.
So, this was when Naruto was revived by Pain. I see. Minato, Jiraya, and Hiruzen did come in clutch there I think. Now, I'm excited to see where this goes next. The Shinigami is at the end of the day a creature that'll get what it wants I think. But, everyone else can also get what they want. I also think that god... this is absolutely depressing and I am a complete and total fan of it. You've absolutely killed it these last few chapters and honestly, I'm excited to see what's next as I read.
Naruto's knowledge is just the peak of depressing. Knowledge is power, but it can also be pain! And I think this is an absolutely perfect example of it. I do wonder how Michieru will be in both the land of the living and the dead though, that'll be interesting. And so... Itachi's gonna die too... Fuck man, you really gotta stab this dagger in deep, don't you? I'm sad again. Oh go- Yep... The depression is here!
Out of all the writers I've seen write sad and depressing stuff, you've always done it the best. And it shows here. And it *hurts*. At least Itachi gets to live thanks To Madato's death. I wonder if he's in hell, and if so what corner of it is he in. I hope that if Kami is brought back, Naruto can come back to... Or, Naruto can become god... Actually, if Naruto becomes Kami that would be really interesting.
Thank you for the chapter.
4/14/2024 c65 Guest
Another great chapter this is the first story I’ve been so invested in that I actually reviewed I can’t wait to see how it all ends thanks for staying strong!
Another great chapter this is the first story I’ve been so invested in that I actually reviewed I can’t wait to see how it all ends thanks for staying strong!
4/14/2024 c65 Rasen01
Hello, how are you? I wanted to tell you that I have been following your story since chapter number 18, although I made the account recently, this is one of my favorite stories since I started with this fic.
I wanted to ask you a few things:
Why did you bring up the fight in Naruto vs Kiba in the jonin exams?
What happened to Danzo, Orochimaru and Kabuto?
Are the bijus going to reappear or have they already died? Because when the jinchuurikis are killed, the bijus eventually reform in the manga. For example Yagura
Are you going to use the Uzumaki temple mask to free the fallen?
And the last thing I wanted to ask you is if you are going to unite the Naruto universe with another, for example with the Bleach universe?
I loved how you are ending the story, although a little sad about how some characters ended, it is understandable because of how the story was written; I tell you that I am going to follow you in case you write another story. Many thanks for everything.
Hello, how are you? I wanted to tell you that I have been following your story since chapter number 18, although I made the account recently, this is one of my favorite stories since I started with this fic.
I wanted to ask you a few things:
Why did you bring up the fight in Naruto vs Kiba in the jonin exams?
What happened to Danzo, Orochimaru and Kabuto?
Are the bijus going to reappear or have they already died? Because when the jinchuurikis are killed, the bijus eventually reform in the manga. For example Yagura
Are you going to use the Uzumaki temple mask to free the fallen?
And the last thing I wanted to ask you is if you are going to unite the Naruto universe with another, for example with the Bleach universe?
I loved how you are ending the story, although a little sad about how some characters ended, it is understandable because of how the story was written; I tell you that I am going to follow you in case you write another story. Many thanks for everything.