10/30/2012 c1 5SwordsOfEternalLight
(decides to mess around with author's mind)
"Ugh...it's terrible...terrible...
"That no one has reviewed, favorited, or apparently even read this!"
This is a rather entertaining read. Although why Mata Nui would know Cyroshell, or somehow manage to project it only around the Toa Nuva, I dunno. But still, rather funny. I think the title throws people off or into the assumption that this is some stupid music video/FF thing. But of course, it's not.
And you misspelled "legend" in the lyrics.
Still, good job! I wanna read the sequel now!