for To Catch A Falling Star1/14/2016 c2 angel
I would love to ear more
I would love to ear more
6/14/2015 c2 The angry bitch
WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU,YOU DAMNED BITCH!
WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU,YOU DAMNED BITCH!
8/15/2012 c2 Guest
update plz
update plz
6/16/2011 c2 xXShizuruXx
Hehe. Lazy to sign in to my account. Anyway, loveeeeee your story :) Hehehe. I like this kind of story. Hehehe. Please updateeee!
Hehe. Lazy to sign in to my account. Anyway, loveeeeee your story :) Hehehe. I like this kind of story. Hehehe. Please updateeee!
4/19/2011 c2 
3The Meepsta
Haha Hannah! You looked at MY story, so I'm now looking at yours! Hope you don't mind... :)
It's really good, so please carry on. I hope the next chapter really is funny. I will force you to write more at school... or else...
You-know-who-I-am :) :)
xxxxxx
3The MeepstaHaha Hannah! You looked at MY story, so I'm now looking at yours! Hope you don't mind... :)
It's really good, so please carry on. I hope the next chapter really is funny. I will force you to write more at school... or else...
You-know-who-I-am :) :)
xxxxxx
4/15/2011 c2 3Shikishima
haha i like how mikan like "If I wasn't in my disguise, I would have kicked him in the 8#5*!" to natsume XD cant wait for the next chpt~~~
Yuki
3Shikishimahaha i like how mikan like "If I wasn't in my disguise, I would have kicked him in the 8#5*!" to natsume XD cant wait for the next chpt~~~
Yuki
4/14/2011 c2 9MischievousRose
Whew! For a second there I thought you're gonna accuse me of FLAMING. *sweatdrops* eheheheh...
And thank you for taking my advice ^.~
But I DO hope that the twist you mean wouldn't be too off. I've read other authors trying their best to twist their plots into something unique that it comes out a bit too off. Something weird.
Well heres a hint, I suggest you to read stories similar to this one, then you could gather different ideas and mold them together. You'd be surprised with the outcome. But don't forget to add your own idea though. There won't be a hint of originality if that's the case.
That's what I usually do and surprisingly, my friends would love whatever story is the outcome.
~ZEN
P.S. please drop by my profile and check out my stories. I want to know your opinion since you already know mine. ^^,
Hope we could be friends...
9MischievousRoseWhew! For a second there I thought you're gonna accuse me of FLAMING. *sweatdrops* eheheheh...
And thank you for taking my advice ^.~
But I DO hope that the twist you mean wouldn't be too off. I've read other authors trying their best to twist their plots into something unique that it comes out a bit too off. Something weird.
Well heres a hint, I suggest you to read stories similar to this one, then you could gather different ideas and mold them together. You'd be surprised with the outcome. But don't forget to add your own idea though. There won't be a hint of originality if that's the case.
That's what I usually do and surprisingly, my friends would love whatever story is the outcome.
~ZEN
P.S. please drop by my profile and check out my stories. I want to know your opinion since you already know mine. ^^,
Hope we could be friends...
4/13/2011 c2 mapleroxy
*gasp*milan became vulgar at the last part but nevertheless it is still awesome I cannot wait foe the next chapter
P.S. Is natsume going to find out about Mikan?
*gasp*milan became vulgar at the last part but nevertheless it is still awesome I cannot wait foe the next chapter
P.S. Is natsume going to find out about Mikan?