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7/21/2015 c1 Guest
I've never seen one like that before.
Awesome job! Would have been nice to see another chapter though
4/16/2015 c1 DuoFox00
That ending. Nearly died from nosebleed
3/4/2015 c1 Guest
Freaking awesome. Lol
Wish you would have continued it.
7/11/2013 c1 lluviabrillante
What a sexy goddamn kink. Fucking YUM. Will there be more of this?
8/10/2012 c1 Guest
He... he sucked his own dick? Holy shit I wouldn't mind choking on that. Hmmmhmmm
7/8/2012 c1 Talty-Icecream
Oh Dear...x3
9/20/2011 c1 25Alan's Only
hehehehhehe I just wanted to cheer the little boy! Lol good job!
6/9/2011 c1 38Sweetums128neo
OTL amazing. |D

Hehehee...amazing. -giggle-
6/8/2011 c1 37Cloy Jubilee
This was good! It was interesting how Al managed to suck his own need, but it would have been better if Ed joined him at the end, yum 3
6/6/2011 c1 SparklySparkles
This was too entertaining. I actually really like it. The way it ended was pretty amazing too.

However, I do think you should continue it. ;)
5/27/2011 c1 Antrikaa
update! update updateupdateupdate! its so awesome it cannot stop!
5/23/2011 c1 2Elifer
Mind Continuing this chapter with a 69 and some take-turn piston-ing? AKA, having them taking turns behind each other?
5/22/2011 c1 T.L
How many people would stay and watch if they saw Alphonse do that? Well, we've got Ed already, including me. Well, up to your dirty minds to figure out.
5/1/2011 c1 13Kitsune-chan'w
omg al is dirty and ed is worse for watching!
4/11/2011 c1 17silvergray1358
hahaha, I'm laughing hysterically at this whole notion, but definitely in a good way. *thumbs up* XD

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